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Boy that can destroy a nation

作者: GraCk
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WebNovel で公開されている、GraCk の作者が書いた Boy that can destroy a nation の小説を読んでください。its an boy story that is very poor family background but one day he obsess godess power that can destroy an entire nation and he obtained this power from an birdgoddes that going to die soon and she w...

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its an boy story that is very poor family background but one day he obsess godess power that can destroy an entire nation and he obtained this power from an birdgoddes that going to die soon and she want to pass his power to other kindperson so she transform into a injured bird were this poor boy find him as a injured bird and take care of him and that how he get godess power.

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Hello, I will be a bit rough but I came with good intent. I don't recommend to read that story at least for now. I think the story can be interesting but the writing quality is really bad. I don't know your setup, but you should put on hold the story and edit the actual chapters. You almost don't use : ., it's important to understand the sentence you write. Also try writing true dialogue : "Hello I'm there... " (me) "Hi you're new there no? " (stranger) There is a few thing commonly used in writing : " " for a dialogue/ speaking, ' ' for intern thinking. Also the high case AZE... To begin the sentence. Don't randomly skip line in middle of a sentence. I think you know most of what I'm saying there but trust me it's really important if you don't care a minimum about writing quality that really don't give readers any will to try reading your story. I wish you good luck with the following.

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