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BLUE FLAMES

作者: Kirigaya_22
Fantasy
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WebNovel で公開されている、Kirigaya_22 の作者が書いた BLUE FLAMES の小説を読んでください。...

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The Dimensional Phone

A sudden package is within the homes of many; they don't know where it comes from. Some are suspicious-well, most likely a lot of them; some are curious and intrigued; some think it's the package that just arrived; but for very few, some just really don't know what it is-just a small box that they are too cautious to get near. However, since it's not really doing anything, or at least nothing happened, some decided to open it. As for some, it's a phone with a very slick and thin design and a blue-hued screen that is transparent, which is to be seen on the other side of the reflection of the screen itself. As for some, they just don't know what it is or what it does, which thankfully leaves a note with instructions on how to use it. How kind of the one who sent them this odd package, especially in their bed. As for no harm that has ever been inflicted upon them, some decided to turn it on, only to see that it was just like any other ordinary phone, but for others, it was a brand new and intriguing invention. However, there is nothing on the phone-well, at least not yet. The only thing that has it are a few apps. [Chatverse] [Shopverse] [OmnicentialTube] Very odd and unique names, and I can't help but cringe for some odd reason, and with that, one of the very few people starts pressing the [Chatverse] app out of curiosity, and she is then seeing on the screen a very dull black background. Simple-looking chat-group. [MissPink has entered the chat.] Disclaimer: All the characters and the cover for this are not mine, they belong to their respective creators

DlinkerNovel · ゲーム
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3 Chs

After Transmigrating, I Became Mentally Ill

Bai Yu transmigrated into a book. She looked at the words on the gate, "Psychiatric Hospital", and fell deep in thought. She could tolerate transmigrating into a book, but it felt awful to transmigrate as a psychiatric patient. Besides, all she did was read this book's synopsis... However, Bai Yu soon began to feel that her days spent here weren't all that bad. That's because patients in this psychiatric hospital were treated very well, and she was practically being treated like a VIP. She had food, shelter, and people to serve her. When her stepmother tried to cause trouble for her, Bai Yu picked up a lamp and started hitting her with it. "Help! Someone wants to hurt me, the queen!" 'Since I'm mentally ill, I don't have to bother with reason. Don't mess with me!' Bai Yu thought. Her stepmother cried in surprise. She never dared to visit Bai Yu again. Just like that, Bai Yu continued to enjoy her peaceful life. However, one day, she realized she was actually married. How did that happen? Did people with mental illnesses not have rights? Why didn't she know she was married? Why didn't anyone discuss such an important matter with her first? The Bais really shouldn't have hit her and turned her into a mentally challenged person... "You're mentally ill, and he's also mentally ill. You're a match made in heaven," the Bais said. After that, Bai Yu questioned her family in a 'friendly' manner. Her fiance, who was also a patient in the psychiatric hospital, saw her in person. He shooed everyone away with his agile moves. "Are you also pretending? What a coincidence," he said with slightly glistening eyes. "To be honest, I'm God's daughter, and I'm here to save the world..." Bai Yu said in a serious tone.Liu Xu's mouth twitched. "Do you think I'm blind?"

Winter Snow · 一般的
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Review for a read until chapter 8. I will never understand the appeal of systems for readers nor what motivates authors to purposefully go against the core of story writing. Putting Grammer and my bias aside, there are unsalvageable mistakes that makes the read unpleasant. The prologue is not catchy at all. It simply follows the bland current of a river mechanically that I can't fathom to understand. It's too normal, too peaceful, too nothing. I want something exci ING or thought provoking that makes we want to read the next chapter, ignoring the small scale of them. The characters are, well, I can't give my opinion on them because I wasn't given the chance to meet them. Who is the Mc and why am I following him in the journey? Not a shred of personality, monologue or otherwise. It makes or breaks a story. The world is never described. Vague mentions of them aren't enough. Making them too detailed is undeniably tedious and unnecessary, I understand, but a middle ground must be found else leave the readers confused. What does the magic school look like, is it hogwards like or modern campus like? What is the buses color, the street, is the sky normal or is green light the norm? I have no idea because they were never briefly touched on. The pace needs to be be slowed down with these corrections. I hope you get better at writing.

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