Bleach Swordsman of Kusajishi

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Good story and beginning! Continue writing, you’re doing great! 👍 Romance? - I hope you can pair him with Unohana Retsu 😏🙏 Add to my library - ✅

An otaku found himself stranded in a dense forest, which turns out to be part of Soul Society. Yes, the Soul Society in the anime that he once watched, Bleach. But... he doesn't have any cheat! How does he plan to fight the enemies like Aizen or Yhwach in the future? Give it a read to find out!

The novel is quite good until chapter 77. Around chapter 77 we have a time skip and it is revealed that the MCs skills have regressed over the last 10+ years because he did like no training and combat. On top of that he has the nerve to worry about saving his friends and to be stressed even though he has literally gotten weaker because he spent his time messing around. Him wasting his time randomly is inconsistent with his character, and makes no sense considering his supposed goal was to survive with his own strength. On top of this the grammar takes a nosedive after chapter 77 and it becomes machine translation type bad with improper use of genders and plurals. Really disappointing to see an otherwise good story absolutely run into the ground.

Tbh i was avoiding this for a while then i got bored looking for new things. So I searched up Bleach And Found this im not regretting it at all and compared to the Other stuff i read i would place this in top 5

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RIP English, I'm out. Plus it's a cchinese novel, I've had enough of that stuff already. I need to complete the min word countttttttttttttttt

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Grammer is bad The plot is the same in the way that the mc's IQ drops to 1 and he wastes 100 years each time for the plot to continue in total (till chapter 130) he wastes 200 years then remembers he needs to train (also bad timing for big time skips) very very annoying OC that clings to him Mc could literally finish everything yet his IQ dropped or he holds back or something else every time pretty much a cycle that happens every time which is very frustrating it's better to watch bleach as nothing will change anyway.

Wow just wow.. This one is pretty good. 200 years before the plot and I already love it. Interaction with the characters is pretty good though. I would like to know if this isn't harem if it does who or whose character will be chosen. I'd like to see no harem and if possible is there any child will bloom on them since this way out of main story or problem.. Here you go 5* I'd like to have more updates; Give me more moAR!

Hope next time you make the mc more intelligent , no one like stupid, annoying mc in fanfiction

What did I even expect from a mc Who has a chinese name? Mc gets a lot stronger after the time skip. Now it would be a good thing normally. But we didnt even see how he killed his first guy. He just got a sword and then next second he already killed 100 People because he lost himself or something. Then he gets random power up because he "refuse to die". He then sucks the c*ck of his zampaktou (figuratively) because why not, its a chinese novel and they like to over exaggerate everything.

like it? No! I loved it great book few mistakes here and there but overall I truly love the story and want more... good job author hoping to see more of it

I dropped it at chapter 30. Not because the story wasn't good, I kind of felt it was getting better and better and the story progressed and even at the start the concept was interesting and good. Also the grammar was without any problems I could spot. The reason I dropped it is because the plots were kind of forced with and without any rhythm. But mainly what annoyed me was that the MC was acting so childish it was getting ridiculous. For example someone taunts him a little and he's already getting so mad he's ready to risk his life or getting expelled after just one or two sentences like he is a third-rate villain in a movie... Or even though he is already 40+ years old (counting just the years he lived in bleach AU) he is it still blushing like a little kid after getting teased, like come on!! Writing quality - 5 stars. Updating stability - 5 stars. Story development - 1 stars. Character design - 1 stars. World background - 5 stars.

hmm...how should i say i read till chapter 34 with fear for each chapter... since the author has hinted that the mc has only anime knowledge thus reading this fanfic is quite a gamble . -THE MOST DANGEROUS THING IS NOT BEING IGNORANT . -THE MOST DANGEROUS THING IS TO THINK YOU KNOW SOMETHING BUT THAT SOMETHING IS ACTUALLY WRONGBUT YOU BELIEVE YOU ARE RIGHT FROM KNOWING ONLY A SMALL PART OF THE INFORMATION OF WHICH LEADING YOU TOWARDS MORE WRONG. to note Hikifune Kirio is a big FAT glutton in the future but MC dont know this sigh makes me scared. MC doesnt know that yachiru is actually zaraki's zanpakuto. MC doesnt know who yawtch is.

it needs a lot of work the mcs progression doesn't make much sense.most of the lore and rules of bleach are just thrown out the window. .........

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hey author san,this fanfic was good,its enjoyable to read. But i seem to noticed that this fanfic seemed different than the first time i read it, i mean in every chapter it always like it got skip to another event like vibe. Way different when i first read it that its more long in chapter and more complete.

The best bleach FF i ever read, the balance between the difference the MC make which change the plan of aizen and other charachters is good add on it the MC who adapte with the world pf bleach at the best way and the character development of his is perfect. keep it going mate[img=update][img=update]