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Azaki : the devil warrior

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What is Azaki : the devil warrior

WebNovel で公開されている、Rossi_billionz の作者が書いた Azaki : the devil warrior の小説を読んでください。After becoming a host for an ancient demon, 15 year old azaki embarks on the journey of a lifetime as he learns what it means to be a warrior...

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After becoming a host for an ancient demon, 15 year old azaki embarks on the journey of a lifetime as he learns what it means to be a warrior

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WashingDishes_07 · ファンタジー
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Cute enough to Kiss!!

*Currently the chapters are being edited.*** Xie Mei was called the Demon Empress of the Qin Empire. Once she yielded her thunder Spear she was unstoppable on the battlefield. She was like a killing machine, slashing her enemies' throats ruthlessly. She stared right through her enemy's eyes as if the goddess of death herself had descended to claim their lives. Fear. That was evident in their eyes as death closed in on them, but they couldn't do anything apart from begging and pleading to spare them. However, none were spared. Even though she guarded the Qin empire and its citizens with her life, people called her cruel. After all, she was a woman. She was cruel indeed, but not heartless. Just like any ordinary girl, she too had a loving family, doting parents, and brothers who pampered her to the core. But fate played a cruel game, and she lost it all in one night. After her family's and her three-year-old son's deaths, she went on a killing spree to avenge them. That was the night when people saw the Demon Empress in action, about whom they had only heard stories. In the end, she was stabbed by the person to whom she bared her heart. Looking into his eyes, all she could find was hatred and disgust; that was a heavy blow to her heart. With a few breaths left, she killed the adulterous pair and burned the entire palace. When death knocked on her door, there was a mocking smile on her lips, as if she were laughing at her stupidity. Her heart was in turmoil when she remembered the faces of her loved ones and her little one smiling at her warmly. "Yu'er, mother loves you," she whispered with her last dying breath. She thought that was her end; however, fate had a different plan for her as her soul reincarnated. She became the Young Miss of the Tang family in the 21st century. This time, she vowed to never give herself a chance to fall in love. And she did avoid it for some time. Until... she met 'Him'. She stared at him as if looking at a lunatic. "What are you talking about??" She roared. "Marry me!!" He repeated firmly. 'Seems like this person has something wrong with his mental constitution,' she thought to herself. She took a deep breath to calm herself and sighed. "Did you lose a few balls or something??" She seriously questioned him. 'Balls??' The blue-eyed man was stunned by her choice of words. "How can you propose to someone whom you have only met once, and it was not even a proper meeting? Did you hit your head somewhere??" "My head is fine. But you are right; let's get to know each other. En? My name is Han Zhixin." He introduced himself politely. No matter how badly she berates him, he wouldn't mind if it meant he could stay with her.  "Let go, you lunatic!! I don't care if your name is Han Zhixin or Li Zhixin!!! I will never marry you, you idiotic bastard." She sneered, trying to break free once again.  'Lunatic? Bastard?' the man gasped. He was appalled by the image she had of him.  When she finally broke free, she did a backflip to get out of his range. Without looking back, she vanished into the cloudless night. Han Zhixin came out of his reverie and stared in the direction she leaped off. His eyes were full of doting smiles for her. 'Who cares if she calls him a lunatic? For her, he was ready to become one.' "It seems like it's decided, my love. it's definitely going to be you and only you!!! My darling wife!!" he whispered. ------------------------------------ Peach_mist: Instagram: @Peach_mist30 * The story is original and not a translation. * ***The cover photo does not belong to me. All credits to the owner. This is a romance novel with a lot of fluff and mystery. I hope you guys enjoy reading it. Please feel free to leave comments and reviews.

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DERRICK_LAWSON
DERRICK_LAWSONLv1DERRICK_LAWSON

Wowww this has got to be one of the best stories I have ever read, the plot, the characters the world design men everything thing is just perfect although I did notice some grammar error in some chapters but it's okay well done👍👍👍👍👍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Jhaydun
JhaydunLv11Jhaydun

It seems like the author has great ideas in place for a story. The themes, ideas, characters, and world seem to be well-thought, but I have to mention that the potential for this story is hidden behind paragraphs that are too long and painfully glaring grammar, capitalisation, and punctuation mistakes. It was also interesting to see the dialogue written as it would be for a screenplay. As the author grows their craft, learns more, and edits their work, I'm sure this novel will become something that many will enjoy reading. Simply finding someone willing to help them edit their novel would improve it significantly. I'd also like to mention to the author that they can use a feature to write an author's comments/thoughts for the end of a chapter, rather than writing their thoughts inside the chapter itself. I'd be more than happy at that point to increase my review, but it will need to stay around 3 stars for now.

WritersBlocku
WritersBlockuLv2WritersBlocku

Overall it is pretty good, the writing style is very unique and different. Replacing quotation marks with the names makes it look like a script, But it does relieve the confusion of figuring out who is talking by placing their names right there. It's good, keep it up, author.

Violet_Ivory
Violet_IvoryLv2Violet_Ivory

The first thing that stood out to me was the writing style. its definitely very different from what i and most people are used to, but for the most part its ok. though its more or less likea summary to a movie than a novel. but because of this style, it feels very stiff and clunky. not much flow to be seen. you can definitely improve in that aspect. some typos here and there, nothing special. Its only been 4 chapters so the characters arent really all that well developed. It looked kinda cliché by the end, i just hope you either have a solid picture of what you want to write, or you have some good ideas. anyways its ok but there are a lot of aspects to improve

Pattyglow
PattyglowLv1Pattyglow

Wonderful story, interesting plot and great world building but you could improve on your grammar aspects I noticed places where you would write "what do mean" and things like this make it hard to read but still it's a nice book

Sirius459
Sirius459Lv10Sirius459

After i read all the chapter i came with the conclusion about this story. First of all the dialog need some improvement it's not like reading a novel but feels like a movie script the world building you create was really nice and i enjoyed reading it so overall yeah this is a good story but need some improvement on the dialog.

cutest_miss
cutest_missLv12cutest_miss

it a very interesting story with a nice writing design which is different from other writers and also stand you out as a potential writer, I'm looking forward to read more chapters of the book,

GMSJakers
GMSJakersLv1GMSJakers

It's an interesting design of the book, but the grammar really throws me off. The first chapter is a blob of words and is very hard to read, so I'd fix that and then get a proofreader or edit the grammar in the story.

Demons_and_I
Demons_and_ILv4Demons_and_I

I'll give you a thumbs up for the effort but I'm gonna keep it real. Grammar is terrible, the story idea is unique and worth building on, the first chapter isn't paragraphed well, but has a lot of information on the book. All in all, concept wise, you are off to a good start, but your writing needs tons of work...

BeckyAnimeGirl54
BeckyAnimeGirl54Lv2BeckyAnimeGirl54

When I read the description, I was hooked. The siblings are so cool. I can't wait to read more. This is a neat story. Keep up the good work.

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