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Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

作者: Bietarnu
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What is Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

WebNovel で公開されている、Bietarnu の作者が書いた Awakened As A Dungeon Core? の小説を読んでください。What happens when a normal man awakens in a world of magic and monsters? What if he awakens as a gemstone that can't move, eat, or communicate but is somehow alive? What happens when this stone learns...

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What happens when a normal man awakens in a world of magic and monsters? What if he awakens as a gemstone that can't move, eat, or communicate but is somehow alive? What happens when this stone learns to cast magic and create rooms, to bring life to monsters of its own and defend itself from invaders? This is the story of that mans journey from a small one room tunnel to a magnificent challenge to the universe. Chapters range from 1k-1.5k words usually! First time writing this type of novel but always wanted to try so any feedback helps! Also below is my patreon! Most things to influence my novel are free but by subscribing to it you help me afford more time to write instead of working two jobs as well as to commission artists to turn my monsters and manic dream creatures into reality! https://patreon.com/user?u=71062598

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KING_Core7619
KING_Core7619Lv4KING_Core7619

well I got tricked in the first 19 chapters that this is a good novel but from chapter 20 it gets trashy the mc is a absolute idiot like come man is the mc the mc or his subordinates or intruders because they get seen more and decides everything for him even things about him self

JesusXChrist
JesusXChristLv14JesusXChrist

Good book, interesting view as a Dungeon Core, Mc is a bit naive and stupid at times, but still a pretty good MC. Not much lore yet, but there's seems to be some coming up, recently established ranking system for the bosses of his Dungeon, although no ranks for the normal mobs yet I believe there will be. Interesting take on how when creatures or humanoids die in the Dungeon, he Becomes able to make them. Although there is no summoning of his own type of creatures, he is able to spawn in multipul copys of anything that dies within his Dungeon minus any intelligence they had when alive. Although the MC is a bit late on the uptake that he is a rock/Dungeon Core & not a human. I believe he will be able to grow soon enough to become a Ruthless Dungeon Core. Book is very similar to those Demon ruling a Dungeon type Tropes with a bit of a twist where it's the core itself, so it's not the enemy of humans. So far, I'd say this book is 8/10, but if/when the MC becomes more ruthless it has the possibility to be a 10/10

Tainowarchief
TainowarchiefLv15Tainowarchief

Very good glad your back, keep up the good work

j_the_gamer_yo
j_the_gamer_yoLv14j_the_gamer_yo

At 1st I like the story but in the main character start to become way too nice.

Ignacio_Gimeno
Ignacio_GimenoLv14Ignacio_Gimeno

It has a dungeon vibe, but thats all. The writing is weird sometimes, with typos there and there, the characters are bidimensional and the story goes too fast, making any evolution in characters akward. The main character is a secondary character and the story is writen in first person in present, a curious choice, but also harder to use. To be fair I only read a third of the book, mainly because a got bored. Is very light, but this factor is more of a personal taste. The main character is also extremly naive, and aparently everyone is. If you want a light non complex dungeon "theme" novel, this would do the trick, but not very good otherwise.

Lestda
LestdaLv15Lestda

The concept of the novel was good till the MC transformed into a total Little Pony Naive Simp, the Dungeon was a dungeon for the first 5chaps and then turned into a typical employee slave... This was a total disappointment, and for the great top of the crop, the novel is already being dropped little by little. Don't waste your time here, the Author took a very easy and good concept (dungeon maker, dungeon core being) and ruined it in just 20 chaps.

zxjan08
zxjan08Lv14zxjan08

If the dungeon ever gets a revamp I think it would be cool to have style transition floors that make sence like the castle, for example you could do a mining cave -> mining cave -> underground pool leading to an water themed level (beach, underwater, whatever) transition to a jungle/forest -> dead forest area -> dealands/desert -> volcano -> mountains -> snowy mountains -> cloud area

KingPumpkin3
KingPumpkin3Lv4KingPumpkin3

Why is my name in another book hahahahahha what is going on

OzzMan
OzzManLv14OzzMan

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HighLordWarden
HighLordWardenLv15HighLordWarden

great read so far, looking forward to how it may develop

NorskyMcNorskFace
NorskyMcNorskFaceLv11NorskyMcNorskFace

Really enjoying this story! The world and description of the monsters is great and refreshing! All types of skills, powers, etc.

Victor_32
Victor_32Lv15Victor_32

Please don’t drop this till 1000 + chapters really good development so far!!!! Keep up the hard work

Lopy2323
Lopy2323Lv1Lopy2323

Great novel ...........,. .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Greg_Holinger
Greg_HolingerLv11Greg_Holinger

honestly i dont like kyle much but it doesnt focus on him too much which i do like also the plenty of perspectives is really cool pretty rare to see it so you get everyones perspective which i really like honestly i just hope this novel doesnt get abandoned like many others because its pretty good

DarkSides
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Bellandi
BellandiLv11Bellandi

I will wait until the story has 50ch and revise the score. Work well, author~ ...............................................................

Live_And_Let_Go
Live_And_Let_GoLv15Live_And_Let_Go

A very well thought out and executed book. Nothing feels forced and it has a very natural flow to it. I hope you keep going with this. .....

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