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Asura in the world of fiction.

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An Asura after getting superior boons from Lord Brahma travels into the world of fiction which can be novels, short drama, movies where he begins to kill the protagonists and takes the heroines in his harem.

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Chapter 1The Boons

"Om Brahmane Namah"

"Om Brahmane Namah"

"Om Brahmane Namah"

"Om Brahmane Namah"

Away from the civilization and worldly riches in a deep and dense forest, an asura is in a deep penance of Lord Brahma for more than thousand years.

This thousand years of penance of the asura has created a yogic fire around his body whose flames are soaring into the Swarga lok where the king of Devas, Indra is ruling with his Devas.

The yogic flames soon hit the meeting hall of the Devas frightening Indra and his Devas to their core as they felt the heat of the yogic flames.

Varun Dev: "Oh Great King of Devas please save your loyal subjects from this dangerous fire."

Vayu Dev: "Oh Great King this flame is very powerful. It is turning my powerful wind into heatwave and sending it back to us."

Agni Dev: "Oh Great King even if I am the Lord of Fire and Flame but still I can't withstand this flame. If this flame continues to go on then the existence of Devas will become history."

The King of Devas, Indra who is sitting on the throne of Swarge is also feeling the same pain as that of the other Devas.

Soon Indra closed his eyes and activated his Divyadrishti which is a divine skill that is used to locate or find anyone or anything in the world.

So using his Divyadrishti, Indra begin to search for the source of the yogic flames in three worlds of Swarga, Earth and Patala.

After scanning the three worlds for quite sometimes, Indra found the source of the yogic flames.

Indra: "I have found the source of this yogic flame."

Varundev: "Where it is Indradev ?"

Indra: "Inside the deep and dense forest of Mahendragiri. An asura is in deep penance of Brahmadev."

Vayudev: "If an asura is doing penance of Brahmadev then it means he wants some boons from him. And if his penance gets success then it will be very bad for us Indradev."

Indra: "You are absolutely correct Vayudev. We must stop that penance of that asura no matter what. Even if we have to kill that asura then so be it. If it saves us then we will do anything."

The selfishness and greed of Indra and other Devas over a future which has not happened yet is clearly evident from these words of him.

And this selfishness and greed of Indra and other Devas are preparing them to commit a grave sin of trying of to harm an innocent soul who is just doing it's penance.

Soon Indra and some other Devas teleported from Swarga straight into the same spot at Mahendragiri where Amoghasur is doing his penance.

When they all appeared near him, the all begin to feel an extreme burning pain due to the yogic flames coming out of the body of Amoghasur.

Unable to handle that pain of burning, all of those Devas went to a great distance from Amoghasur and after going away from him, they all felt some ease in that burning pain of theirs.

Varundev: "Indradev what should we do now ? The yogic fire which has been created by the deep penance of this asura is very strong."

Indra: "Varundev you are the lord of all types of water in the world. Use your power to put out this yogic fire then we will kill him together."

After receiving this order of Indra, Varundev came forward and began to use his powers which brought big balls of water floating in the air.

Then he threw the water balls on the yogic fire but the water balls turned into steam in air even before touching the yogic fire and then a fire ball emitted from the yogic fire and hit Varundev which made him fly away from his position and got hit on the wall very violently.

Varundev: "Aaahhhh...."

Seeing this condition of Varundev, Agnidev came forward and since he is the lord of fire, so he used his powers trying to control the yogic fire.

But soon the high flames began to spread out from the yogic fire which then moved straight towards Agnidev and hit him hard on his chest which sent him flying straight onto the wall as well.

Next Vayudev the lord of wind tried to extinguish the yogic fire but the this yogic fire took over the fiery wind of Vayudev and threw him out of that cave using hot airs.

Now only Indra remained at that place who was not harmed by the yogic fire. So he began to sent energy blasts towards the asura but none of his energy blasts couldn't penetrate through the yogic fire.

Seeing this Indra became very furious, so he immediately summoned his own mighty weapon Vajra and then chanting the divine mantra of the Vajra, he threw it towards the asura.

The Vajra charged up with divine lightening powers began to move towards the asura but soon the yogic flames created a big wall of flame between the asura and Vajra.

And when the Vajra hit the wall of yogic flames, sparks of fire and electricity began to spread out of that collision point.

But then the yogic flame began to devour the Vajra inside it and soon the flames completely devoured the divine weapon, shocking Indra who just a few moments ago was very happy.

After devouring the weapon, the yogic flames began to move towards Indra and seeing this danger coming towards him, Indra ran away from there and following him the other injured devas also ran away from there.

And after that the yogic flames and fire also disappeared leaving Amoghasur in his deep penance.

Soon the echoes of his deep penance reached Brahmalok and soon his deep mantra chanting reached in the ears of the lord to impress whom Amoghasur is performing penance.

Sitting atop the giant lotus, wearing all white clothes, with his four heads adorned by golden crowns and his hands holding a lotus and kamdal, Lord Brahma opened his eyes and came out of his meditation.

Then he heard the chanting of his name and immediately he knew who is doing penance for him. So Lord Brahma immediately went to the place where Amoghasur is doing his penance.

Soon Lord Brahma sitting on his big lotus appeared in air right before Amoghasur while a bright aura covered his body.

Brahmadev: "Amoghasur open your eyes. I am really impressed by your penance. Open your eyes son."

Hearing the divine voice and words of his Lord, Amoghasur stopped his penance and opened his eyes and at this time he saw, Lord Brahma in front of him.

So Amoghasur immediately folded his hands and bowed his head down in proper salutation for his Lord.

Amoghasur: "Amoghasur humbly thanks Lord Brahma to hear my penance and also for appearing before me."

Brahmadev: "Amoghasur, I am deeply pleased by your penance. So tell me what boon do you want from me ?"

Amoghasur: "My Lord before coming to that I want to say something to you. If you allow me to say ?"

Brahmadev: "Go ahead son."

Amoghasur: "Thank you so much My Lord. My Lord I had performed my penance dedicated to you for more than thousands of years. When my reached at the final stage I was attacked by Indra and his group of devas. I want some justice regarding this matter Brahmadev before stating my boon."

Hearing his words, Brahmadev closed his eyes saw all things that Indra and other devas have done to destroy the penance of Amoghasur. After finding everything, Brahmadev opened his eyes and said...

Brahmadev: "I am really sorry the problem which the devas have created for you son. Tell me what I can do for you to give you the justice."

Amoghasur: "My Lord I know you can't give me immortality because it is the rule of destiny that whoever has taken birth has to die. So My Lord I want you to grant five boons of my choice. This will give me justice."

Brahmadev: "I agree, state your boons that you want my son."

Amoghasur: "My Lord, I need the following boons,

1. Superior strength than any divine and human being only second to The Tridevs and Tridevis.

2. New power and skill conjuring.

3.Superior Divine Weapons summoning of the Tridevs and Tridevis.

4. If I travel to a world which doesn't change anything in this world, then I can't die in that world. I will only die if I am present in this world only in the hands of Mahadev and except Mahadev no one shall kill me.

5.Master of Illusion Magic, Supreme Master Combatant in both hand to hand combat and weapon warefare and Supreme knowledge about the plot and world of the fiction.

6. Power to travel into the fiction world.

These six boons are what I want from you My Lord."

After hearing the boons from Amoghasur, Brahmadev didn't hesitated for a minute and immediately agreed to give him the boons that he wanted.

Brahmadev: "Amoghasur, I, Brahma, The Creator of this world, gives you all the boons that you have asked for. Tathastu. Tathastu. Tathastu. Tathastu. Tathastu. Tathastu. Tathastu. One more thing, since the yogic fire that was created by you during your penance, from now on becomes one of your greatest defence and attack weapon."

Saying these words, Lord Brahma showed his hand towards Amoghasur and from his hand, a bright light came which entered inside the body of Amoghasur.

After the light completely entered inside the body of Amoghasur and disappeared from his hand, Lord Brahma completed giving the boons to Amoghasur and then he left that place and went to his own abode Brahmalok.

After Brahmadev left the that place, Amoghasur tidied himself fully and then he began to laugh in an evil manner because he has achieved every thing that he wanted as his boons.

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