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I dont find any errors on reading this novel, in fact the prologue is interesting and an idea about God's is really a greattt concept. This should be read by everyone though and oh, how to be one of the twelve diamonds elite?

Hey everyone, well I've finally decided I want to take my book to the next level, so would kindly like to ask if you could all support me by sharing this book with your friends and if you want you can vote. I want to be able to join the rankings but it's not time yet for me so all I can ask for is your support. And thank you for supporting me.

Sorry ❤️ author you had to change your book because fanfics can't be accepted as original stories. but don't worry I'll support you and you must update more for us 😉

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I'm glad your story can now be voted author and I would gladly support you since you story has alot of potential 😩😭✋✋and should be recognized. And pls update more

I didn't find the synopsis that appealing but the prologue is bomb author. I mean it was like I was seeing some movie, it was that descriptive and emotional. I hope for this novel's success author-sama! Fighting!!!

A very interesting and amazing story author, i hope your book gets noticed soon and i'll be cheering you on. Keep up the good work. i like Iris and i already hate the black diamond

The story is absolutely amazing. Its not following any tropes and its unique in its own way. i'm not able to predict what would happen next. THis story truly deserves to be great

The story Is amazingly written. The story is catchy and very interesting to read. The character description and world building has been done well. Great job author.

Author pls tell me when there would be a fast update. This slow update is killing me 😭😭😩😩✊✊ I love your story and leaving me on a cliffhanger like that is just mean.

i really like this story. theres nothing that i can complain about. the author has done a great job at writing. i love it so much and will read it again

This was a very fun read. I read all the way to chapter 11 so far and the story as well as the author's writing just keep getting better and better. I enjoyed reading, it was very interesting and the pace was perfection. There were little to no grammatical errors making this an easy and understandable read regardless of the many types of people I had to memorize lol. There were so many: Diamonds, gems, pearls, regals and later monsters and probably a lot more but those were the ones I remembered. I'm looking forward to future updates, keep up the wonderful work [img=recommend]

Although by no means a bad story, the writing often feels amateurish, using lackluster and repetitive wording that makes the story feel more like a glorified middle school fan-fic than a fantasy novel. Though many people seem to enjoy the author's style, so don't take my analysis as a deterrent. The world-building is fairly detailed, if not overly expository and at cost of early story pacing. Things, people, and locations are often over-described every time they're mentioned or are always mentioned in full name, making sentences harder to read and bogging down the story's flow. The characters are fairly well done, only feeling more like "characters" than people due to the exposition and description issues I've mentioned earlier. I'll leave world-building and characters at "solid," as the story hasn't been around long enough to fully realize either of them. Though I will say, leaving things to unfold as the story progresses will leave you with far more to work with later, and will lessen your chances of driving the story in a direction that makes no sense, just for more content. Pacing>Exposition My second piece of advice would be to use more descriptive wording, rather than more descriptions. The reader's detail can fill in a lot, part of reading is imagining what's happening. Using descriptive wording and painting a picture that allows them to fill in the gaps, rather than overly describing things, allows for the story to flow much more naturally, while still giving them an idea of what things are like in the story.

Hello auth I am hooked with your diamonds story and it is really very interesting. Your writing style and story development is good. I felt that the content on the initial chaps is too much to take for light readers. So please check it once apart from that everything is nice. All the best❤

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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your story is amazing. Every time I read chapter by chapter it makes me very very curious. Moreover, there are unexpected moments that make this story even more interesting. good job [img=recommend][img=update]

It is a great concept and I am reading this for the first time!! Different characters and different personalities are fun to read especially when you perceive them as the diamonds described by the author <3. There are times when the tense keeps changing but that doesn't disrupt the flow of reading at all. 4.8/5 from me personally because this is a gem in the world of games and with a little polishing it will shine to one of the bests.

The story setting is interesting but it felt like there was too much information being told in the first chap(but I can undst that it is bcz it is the introductory chap) . Except for that -the character descriptions was nice. Hope u get a nice ranking!!!

The story sounds interesting, I'm not really into this genre but, reading this wasn't bad. It's well written and you will find yourself looking for the next chapter!! You should give it a try. Character Design: It was a good idea to explain every important character in the prologue from the start, so the readers are not lost while following the story. It makes people curious to see how Iris being Shiro now will change knowing the colour of her diamand. Story development: It's logically written, we have a start a dreadful event and a new life!