Amoral Village Head (Dropped)

Shit! This novel is definitely not for me. I still haven't read this and I will definitely not read this. I always imagine the mc as me so when the review of others said his(mc) mom gets @#$$ while he's watching in my mind I'm thinking FUCK THIS NOVEL!!! I don't like it when my/mc's girl gets @#$$ by another man. Sorry I don't usually give rates low 3 cause even if I don't like this novel some probably like it but this novel I HATE THIS!!! Sorry author I have fragile heart so whenever mc's girl (or probably my girl cause I like I said ^) flirts or have s*x with other men it hurts my heart. I can't read novels like this

1 star because the author had his mom happily fuking some other dude in front of him!! Get rid of that scene and I will get rid this review and write a 5 star one instead.

Why don’t you add “CUCK MC” as a tag as well? Village head fUcks his mom constantly in front of him and he watches as his mom happily takes the old village head. Lame af Author is a cuck and has a cuck fetish

I like it! Even though it has short chapters the updates are steady and the story is flowing smoothly. The sex scenes are done just right. They are very intriguing and arousing, done step by step and not just toast out of the blue in the chapter.

i always go mad when you read something and the chapters short...but bro you a genius your chapters are short but you still managed to create background and a good story... you gave us a simple and short description of the vilage and yet it was enough to imagine, same thing for the type of powers etc... if i had to point a flaw i would say you lack bit in the description of the characters but then again, i dont know what females/males are going to be relevant to the story, you might just want to cut in the description of useless characters after all you described the mother,sister and the MC reasonable well keep going i really like your work

Trash NTR, dont even bother reading. Who the **** even bothers to write this kind of **** and thinks 'it looks good'. Big no from me, dog**** village and dog**** logic.

Damn man keep writing and don't pay attention to these bull****ers making a scene about chief fucking hus mom if. And ****ers if you feel repulsed by some random dude fucking mc's mom and not he himself fucking her then. There is something wrong in your brain. So just keep quiet as mr author is doing a great job. Also I also don't like cucked mc's but here it was showing how casual sexual relationships are otherwise imagine yourself being buried balls deep in your sister while your mother happens to see you. So just keep it cool.

So far the story is off to a good start. Not much a can say about the story seeing as how all we've read about so far is the village he lives in. I am curious to see what the lays beyond this small village the MC lives in. Keep up the good work author! **: ignore all the people giving one stars because the MC was 'cucked'. Cucking involves you sleeping with the person first, which was not the case.

Good novel, bad that the author left it, I hope this was not influenced by the whining of virgins. ..............................................................

I use to think this might be a stupid ntr type of read, but there’s a surprising hint of mystery to this that you come by later on. This is a nice concept and i want to see the ending that the author gives us, yes there’s a bad part in it where the mother is having sex with the village chief but that in itself gives us information on how this world of theirs works, but on a good note turns out only the chief is interested in sex but isnt involved with the mcs endeavours after that one chapter. P.S. the only reason its 4.2 is because of the lack of uploads lately

Yeah, what the other review said is true. MC Mother got fak by village head (not an advance civilization, no morality, and they use Sex or 'Khursch' as a barter, most male villagers not interested in ***, the same with females because the males are shot n' go). If you ignore that chapter (only one scene and it goes like 'insert-shot-done'), the rest of chapters are MC screwing his Mother, Sister and female villagers. I'm not a fan of NTR and never will, and that scene is surprise me and stab me in the heart (right in the kokoro), but after read some more its get better because MC and his mother smut scene is HOT.... Give it a try, maybe you'll like it, just ignore that part. Pity this novel has been dropped... ToT

An interesting slice of life story... It's pleasant and relaxing to read, keep the passion author, it's worth it 😉. Who don't want to profit from his blessing to get some cute girls?

ahora el autor sale con la excusa de que el jefe de aldea es el padre, que reverenda mierda, todo lo que hace para querer arreglar la estupidez que escribió sobre la la madre del MC siendo follada felizmente por el jefe mientras que el protagonista mira excitado. Sin embargo, se salva un poco debido a que agregaron la etiqueta de "voyeur" pero sigo diciendo lo mismo, si tu corazón es débil y no soportas ver a tus mujeres o futuras mujeres tener sexo en frente tuyo y que eso te excite, esta novela no es para ti

Keep going :D the novel is really nice >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

First, Thank you author for the story and I wish you will keep going ignoring all the a**hole's comment. For the reader's, it is not a NTR novel that looks like in the beginning of the novel. It was a world building. It was a very important step to build the future chapters. Keep reading the story and you will find the story has a good plot line and has a good future. Overall, it is a very good novel on R-18 tags

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You should continue this again my friend. Even if we exclude the juicy smut scenes, ur story is still very interesting to me. And now that it has over a million views, I'm sure if u start writing back, u will be seeing visible results, yep. Anyways, this was a really interesting and enjoyable read for me. Hope to read more. Thank you very much. ^-^

Now I Would Like to say first that there is a lot of hate concentrated on this novel coz people just assume it has 'netorare' in the plot. The author has already dropped it so i know i am quite late, most prob b'coz of the overwhelming criticism on the 'ntr'. Well i also steer clear of novels with ntr from a mile away but this novel basically doesn't have "netorare" if you understand what it is. it basically mean mc's girl is cucking him which doesn't really happen here coz mc and the lady aren't in a relationship yet and she is having her time with someone else. Now if you consider that as being cucked then sorry to inform you unless the girl is a virgin everybody is a cuckold. What everyone has been shouting on as 'ntr' was voyeurism basically. Ofcourse everyone has already marked her as the mc's lady so ofcourse they assume it to be ntr. Sad to see a novel with potential be dropped like that due to such harsh criticism. If you don't like a novel don't read but atleast open the bloody novel, don't just read some review and decide what's good and what's not. If author reads the review they i would like to thank him for the chapters and well hope to read another good piece of work by him soon.......

it was a very enjoyable read. it is too bad that the author dropped is I really like the story to continue it also seems like it was close to its conclusion before the author dropped it

Many people are complaining 'bout NTR like lol, she's just the MC's mom like wtf bro, can't even consider that as NTR since they don't even have a romantic relationship, plus that was necessary move lol Still, the strory's pretty good. Got some mystery to how their world works and all