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Aldous The Contractor(War of Worlds)

作者: MAD_COLORS
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Well this is great! I saw you supporting my book and I was surprised of you doing so! I tried your book and the story line is great and good choice of heroes!

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Hi, so I read your story and here's my review: The idea is good(actually I pretty like it since it has something to do with aging), and the wording is good. It just lacks punctuation, some paragraphs(you need to cut them to make it look better for the readers), and you should know to when to use the capitalizations and the small letters. And in some part, you can just combine into one chapter, after all, it's quality over quantity. That's all for my review, goodluck with your story :)

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