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Abraxas

作者: Minitabs
Magical Realism
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What is Abraxas

WebNovel で公開されている、Minitabs の作者が書いた Abraxas の小説を読んでください。Alix, a young student from Ol'Tree village is soon to be graduated but things seem to go a little awry. This young man who gradually loses his haughty personality with discovering a world bigger than ...

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Alix, a young student from Ol'Tree village is soon to be graduated but things seem to go a little awry. This young man who gradually loses his haughty personality with discovering a world bigger than anything he knew will set sails on a path of no return like many before him, The Abraxas. How far will he go? Set sails in the world of Orbis, full of treacherous history with unpredictable future where gods are not the main threat.

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Reincarnated in Middle-Earth: The Legacy of Light

**Introduction:** In a small apartment cluttered with gaming consoles, empty soda cans, and half-read fantasy novels, John Mercer spent his days lost in the virtual worlds that offered a refuge from his bleak reality. A once-passionate gamer, John's enthusiasm had waned, replaced by a numbing routine and a growing sense of despair. His favorite escape was "The Lord of the Rings," a world of epic battles and heroic quests that seemed infinitely more vibrant than his own. John had always dreamed of living in Middle Earth, where he could wield a sword, cast spells, and stand against the forces of darkness. The world of Tolkien was his sanctuary, a place where he could imagine himself as a hero rather than a faceless player in an endless grind of online games. But those were just fantasies, fleeting moments of solace that dissipated as soon as he logged off and returned to the harsh light of day. One fateful night, after hours of playing yet another repetitive dungeon crawl, John fell asleep with "The Lord of the Rings" open beside him. He dreamed of vast forests, ancient cities, and a sky filled with stars. But this dream was different. It felt vivid, almost tangible, as if he could reach out and touch the trees, hear the rustle of leaves, and feel the weight of a sword at his side. When John awoke, he found himself in a place that was both familiar and utterly foreign. The air was crisp and filled with the scent of pine and earth. He was in a forest, unlike any he had seen in his world—tall, majestic trees that seemed to touch the sky, their leaves whispering secrets in the breeze. Confusion gave way to awe as he realized where he was: Middle Earth, the land of his dreams. Before he could fully grasp his situation, a glowing interface appeared before his eyes, reminiscent of the games he used to play. It displayed a series of stats, skills, and quests, transforming his existence into a game-like system. John's heart raced as he read the words that would change his life forever: **Welcome, John Mercer. You have been chosen.** **Current Location: Middle Earth - Lórien Forest** **Objective: Discover your purpose in this world.** The system was intuitive, responding to his thoughts and guiding him through his first steps in this new reality. It granted him basic abilities, increasing his strength, agility, and perception to levels beyond anything he had known. He could see his stats, skills, and inventory, just as he had in countless games before. But this was no game—it was real. As John explored his surroundings, he encountered the beautiful and enigmatic Lady Galadriel and the wise Lord Celeborn, rulers of Lothlórien. They welcomed him with a mixture of curiosity and caution, sensing the unusual nature of his arrival. John chose to keep the truth of his origins a secret, knowing that his knowledge of their world could be both a blessing and a curse. In the days that followed, John trained tirelessly, learning to harness the power of the Heart of Lórien, a mystical artifact that pulsed with a radiant energy. He discovered that his game-like system could interface with the Heart, amplifying his abilities and granting him access to powerful magic. Each quest he completed, each skill he mastered, brought him closer to understanding his role in this world. But Middle Earth was not the idyllic paradise he had imagined. Dark forces were stirring, shadows that threatened to engulf the light. John soon found himself at the forefront of a looming war, tasked with defending Lórien from the encroaching darkness. With every battle, he grew stronger, his resolve hardening as he faced the reality of his new life. As the shadow of war loomed larger, John knew that his journey was only beginning. He would need to forge alliances, uncover ancient secrets, and confront the darkness that sought to consume Middle Earth. With the power of the Heart of Lórien and the strength of his allies, he would stand against the shadows and fight for

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Sword Of Chaos

[Silver Tier Winner For WPC 158- Kingdom Building] Ancient Swords, a sword that possesses the power and potential to surpass higher beings that are stronger than Gods. Due to the threat it causes, all Ancient Swords are besieged by the Semi-Supreme Beings (beings who are almost omnipotent). That incident caused all of the Ancient Swords to be fragmented into hundreds of thousands of pieces and scattered throughout the multiverse. Even the strongest Ancient Swords which are The Sword Of Chaos and The Sword Of Origin weren't able to win against the Semi-Supreme Beings. The original counterpart of Chaos, the Sword Of Chaos, is wielded by the weakest swordsman and after 10,000 years have passed, both of them became the strongest existence in the God Realm. A lot of Supreme Gods coveted the power of the Sword Of Chaos so all of those Supreme Gods ganged up against Chaos and his wielder until Chaos and his wielder perished in the battle. Ancient Swords can't die so instead of dying, Chaos finds himself in a cave with nothing other than his power to wield Chaos itself. His Knowledge? Most of his memories are sealed by a higher being! Cultivation Base? His life was saved, not his cultivation base. Thus, he has to start everything from scratch with only his chaos sword forms as his cheat. "My previous wielder and I didn't lack power but instead, allies! So, I will create my kingdom, the entire realm as my palace! Those Supreme Gods better not get senile or they will not know what kills them!" ... Author: ShadowKatake Discord Link: https://discord.gg/xymuEWjYK5

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Well, shamelessly commenting here myself, if I can't do even a little bit of self promotion... I hope you love this work of mine for I have deep expectation for it, a particularly large world already designed for most part, a logic one made of thermodynamic laws similar to our owns but where it's possible to achieve much more. I know one of my weaknesses is the English language which is not my mother tongue, so I write not as quicker as I want, and with, without a doubt, lots of errors and mistakes. So my update speed will be for now, one chapter per day, and if with time I can write faster, I will post more often. The chapter will be approximately 2000 word each. Enjoy, and if you don't, don't hesitate to post why, critics are welcomed for me to progress.

lee_or_skiden
lee_or_skidenLv4lee_or_skiden

Well there is not much to say. The characters are on point the story is developing in a brisk pase and the overall world sounds fantastic. Only two criticisms come to mind: The first, being the grammar mistakes you can find littered everywhere without much improvement. The writer needs an English grammar checker at least. I even recommend putting it through Google there are so many missing letters and no proper use of had/have. The second is the boring first chapter where we get an info dump and only a small interaction with an elder. First impression is important!!!!!!!!! All the info given is being told not SHOWED and is not a great way to hook in the audience. Other then these two the rest is amazing and I would love to read this story going forward. To the writer: I don't know if you have plans for it but pls continue to write this story.

Nonny69
Nonny69Lv12Nonny69

Few minor mistakes in the writing quality, makes some sentences hard to make out what it actually mean, but with the good storyline and character development, these mistakes are only a small price to pay. This story is good I can't wait for the new chapters. The development of the world during the story makes it interesting, keeps you reading, I am only on chapter 15, lastest one at the time of the reveiw, but it already draws me in and makes me want to know more.

Chachamac
ChachamacLv2Chachamac

Great story, I want more !!! For the update quality I can't really say it's too soon but for the world backround, some interesting little sentence that show there is more to it, a likeable MC not too cliche for the moment, the writing quality seems really good for me but I'm not a native english speaker either.

Primate
PrimateLv4Primate

I will like to commend you for your work. Great job so far. I like your writing despite some mistakes here and there. As a writer too, i understand. Love your story line, world building and your characters. Great job.

ShinSungmi
ShinSungmiLv4ShinSungmi

I don't see much errors when it come to grammar, and it's a well-written plot. The plotline seems interesting and sort of unique. Keep up with the good work!

Elixir
ElixirLv2Elixir

Actually, one of the first novels I read on this site, discovered by chance on the first page, pleasantly surprised by the writing quality even if some mistake can be seen here and there. The story and the main character are enjoyable with a deep background and human emotions. The pace of one chapter per day seems fine to me as they are actually quite long. I'm waiting for more, please don't drop Author !!

Eslyna
EslynaLv4Eslyna

Although I said I'll give feedback, but honestly the book didnt fit my tastes so I didnt read much. What I saw was that your paragrahs were too long. Litterslly covered my whole phone screen. This is a novel, not a educative paper for school. Shorter parafrahs are better, seperated by thoughts for novels. I didn't notice typos but saw you mossed somecommas oncein a while. Not that big od deal thouvh since you still used xommas some timez, still better to reread a vit slower to see where ya missed them though. World background seemes really good exxept the prologue. Tha just confused thebhexk out od me, which Im guessing is why u put it n auzilary not vol1 as its cobfusnng at least for me. You should always put prologue in your volume, when you clixk read it ges strsight to C1 (at least for me) so somepeople will miss it. Camt sag much about char development as I didnt readmuch, but story and chara look good. Canttell much though. Laatly your update speed isbreally good, would add release schedle though, getyou more fans and consiatency

zetsubouaichan
zetsubouaichanLv14zetsubouaichan

Read up to chapter 30. The writing quality is alright. There were a few mistakes here and there, but it did not ruin my reading experience. The chapters are pretty long. I would suggest for the author to shorten some paragraphs. It was a bit hard to read as I was using apps. This genre/type of story is something that I usually enjoy. However, the first chapter did not grab me. I have to reread it twice to understand what was going on. I was kinda lost after the fall (chapter 4). I guess part of it was because I could not connect with the character. I don't understand the world yet. And I also blame the long paragraphs. LOL. However, it gets better after I read more. I guess it takes time for me to get used to the characters and the world in the story.

rebecca_ringdomsto
rebecca_ringdomstoLv1rebecca_ringdomsto

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

Atel
AtelLv2Atel

I actually quite like this story. The characters are fresh compared to other novels, the background seems impressively vast and is spoken of in the early chapters, sign for me that the Author knows where he is going. The update of one chapter per day never failed once from its first published chapter. This fresh work deserved more recognition and the grammar mistakes don't bother me much as what is said in other reviews, there were small ones at the beginning but it's truly better now, the Author is taking into account the reviews and comments posted. The story had kind of a slow pace use to develop the world and its several important characters and not full of fillers.

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