A Pervert's Dream (DISCONTINUED Until REWRITE)

I've been enjoying this fanfic since I found it and I've been stalled the chapters up until the most recent one and I have to say so far I have loved it keep up the excellent writing just know it's not many people who can do what you do and you get my highest respect for that for whatever that's worth progress water👍😎

My man became as straight forwardly as possible, a man of focus, commitment, and sheer will. He knew his priority. To bang black widow, what a chad

This man is a man of culture.

the title of story is misleading. this ain't fap metarial this is a genuine good story. his power is cultivation in spiderman world . it's not completely spiderman world though there is fusion of other movie . good book till now

Another author that forgets to mention that his ff will have disgusting cultivation ..... at first he himself mentioned cultivation as nothing more than trash ( which it is ) , but then he " changed his mind " ........ another garbage ff

At the start this was an awesome fanfic. He has the hots for Nat and wants to get strong to get her. I get it, I like it and the execution was good but then it started falling. Now by all means story is still in its infancy even after 20 chapters and could get better and I will still read it but I want to write this as I feel it is deteriorating. The fall started when he started getting strong but then got nerfed. I get why he was nerfed because getting strong quickly will leave nothing to when he gets to Mcu as he is in Spiderman 1 rn. So I was fone with it, he even got some ability after nerf to balance out but that felt cheap not gonna lie. Then he got nerfed again and now I think this is where the cycle start. He gets strong, something happens he gets nerfed again. Now this is Mcu so something happening is 100% accurate and set backs are necessary but he has been consistently losing and I don’t like it in any fic and not in this one. The arc has started to feel bloated as the cycle continues. Spoiler******* He heals peter, loses cultivation and only has what some martial arts and one ability? Weak as s*it again. The entire stuff with Uaatu is just bleh. Like I couldn’t care less. He beats doomsday copy Norman and loses everything he has and has to get Norman’s tainted life force which will late 100% become another nerf as consequence or something. See the cycle I’m talking about. ***** Update stability, I don’t remember but it was good at start but has slowed down to a crawl. Thats how it feela but take it with a grain of salt. I will still be reading it and hope it gets better. Nat is not going to come until chapter 300 or something as Spider man 1 arc is going to go on till 100 chaps at least with the progress it is going till now and might take a year with the update speed. My suggestion wait till a bunch of chapter come out like more than 60 then read this.

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After that chapter things starter to fall off good luck with your fanfic it was fun for a few chapter but gone down hill real quick.....................

I'll be honest I wasn't expecting this fanfic to be as good as it is. The author did this really funny thing with subverting our expectations, in the beginning were made to believe that he's primary goal is getting into Natasha's panties. And for all the people that read the first 6 chapters and left it because of cultivation. I understand but hers the thing cultivation was present for like 5 good minutes before being kicked to the waist side where it belongs. Another thing I noticed is that a group of people have been review booming this authors stories because if you read this story there is no way that this story falls below 4.5. Allright that's all I have to say... go away now.

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I don’t like the fact he has cultivation in a non-cultivation world and I don’t like cultivation novels very much due to the brain cells that I lose trying to understand it

The story so far is about a guy on a journey, with the end goal being to bang Black Widow. It's development has been okay, but the path is not a straight line all the way to the top. He is a powerful character, but once he reaches his end goal, if it weren't for the changes that the author made in the story in chapter 40, then it would be hard to keep the author interested in finishing this story, because it's hard to make an OP Mc slice of life after the main goal has been completed, like in Monkey in the Unverse.

It's an honestly brilliant story. You have woven the story beautifully with great characters and literally amazing words. Impressive. Thank you for the brilliant story.

lol. This is good. The mc knows what he want. Need more please. lol. This is good. The mc knows what he want. Need more please.lol. This is good. The mc knows what he want. Need more please.

I can nothing add. It's was terrible ok maybe first 5 chapters you can try but later its fall soo low. 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁

Don't know why the rating is so low but this is really good. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

The author has improved their writing style since last series. The story is much more streamlined, has better pacing, and the mc is more likeable. Also more relatable in that he is more in tune with his emotions. Thank you for your continued efforts.