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A Killer Can't Change

作者: MisterClaps
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WebNovel で公開されている、MisterClaps の作者が書いた A Killer Can't Change の小説を読んでください。A psychotic killer with a kill count numbering in the thousands.His methods of killing that can make anyone vomit with just the sight of it.With every body found is a picture of his face with a bright...

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A psychotic killer with a kill count numbering in the thousands. His methods of killing that can make anyone vomit with just the sight of it. With every body found is a picture of his face with a bright smile posing with the head of his victim. And despite having his identity exposed, His killing spree continued for 33 years. Finally after decades of searching and chasing, He was now caught in the middle of decapitating his last victim. Judge: "With the amount of evidence gathered here today, this court sentences John Dweller to death! Any last words you despicable monster?" John: "...Thanks for this judge, I was getting bored here on earth anyway so a change in scenery in heaven or hell might be a good change. It was fun playing you people." those were the final words John left for the world. John Dweller, Age 56, dead on September 29, 2013. ====== Somewhere in a land of clouds... God: "Who's next on the list? Hmm let's see here.... John Dweller..." Reading through John's book of life, God's face changed from boredom to worried. God: "Oh cosmos... This one seems to have had quite the life down there... Welp on you go then little one. And with those words and a flick of his finger, God sent whatever was left of John's existence to a different world for another god to worry about. ==WARNING== This story has some screwed up stuff planned to give the MC some trauma to really ease him into being a killer. And one of those are child molestation so if yall aint into that then this might not be a story for you. =====FOR THE ARTIST===== I DO NOT OWN the art on the cover, I couldn't find the owner of this picture anywhere I looked. So if the artist sees this and want's it taken down just email me at bertingsburger@gmail.com (Yes i know the email looks like a joke but its what i actually use for anything that isnt involved in my personal life) Also my eyes are kind of screwed up and i end up pressing on "a" alot, so please be patient if you see words that just had a random "a" in it. i'll fix it when i find it.

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Zufahaira Benasir Elliyah, gadis cantik yang saat itu tengah mengendarai mobil dengan kecepatan cukup tinggi. Saat ia berniat akan menghindari lubang ditengah jalan, justru Haira menyerempet pengendara ojek online. Mengakibatkan penumpang ojek mengalami luka yang cukup parah. Ammar Nurzail Ralf, seorang CEO muda nan tampan, ia menjadi korban kecelakaan yang Haira sebabkan. Atas kelalaian Haira dalam berkendara, kini Ammar harus terbaring lemah di rumah sakit, bahkan kaki Ammar terluka parah. Mengakibatkan, untuk beberapa waktu yang belum pasti, Ammar harus menggunakan korsi roda untuk aktifitasnya. Ammar akan melaporkan Haira kekantor polisi. Namun, Haira memohon dan berjanji akan melakukan apapun asal ia tidak dilaporkan kepolisi. Untuk meyakinkan Ammar, Haira pun mengaku hanya sebagai sopir taxi online. Ammar akhirnya memberikan syarat untuk Haira, apabila ia tak ingin dilaporkan kepolisi. Ammar memberikan syarat, agar Haira pergi kesebuah kampung, dimana kampung tersebut adalah kampung yang penduduknya sebagian besar berpenghasilan sangat minimum, dan masuk dalam kampung tertinggal. Ammar ingin Haira membuktikan, dalam waktu satu tahun ia bisa merubah kampung tersebut menjadi kampung yang warganya berpenghasilan lebih layak, dan bisa menyamakan dengan kampung lain. Tanpa pikir panjang Haira pun menyanggupi syarat dari Ammar, terlebih syarat yang Ammar berikan adalah salah satu misi Haira. Haira yang menyukai tantangan dan senang dengan dunia baru, memutuskan dengan yakin akan membuktikan pada Ammar bahwa ia bisa merubah kampung tersebut. Dari yang warganya berpenghasilan minimum sampai bisa menjadi warga yang berpenghasilan cukup. Haira paham betul, bahwa usahanya tidak akan mudah. Haira sudah siap dengan semuanya, dengan penolakan, cemooh, dan bahkan sulitnya mengajak warga untuk mengikuti arahan Haira. Ia bukan gadis yang mudah menyerah, pelajaran 5 tahun memulai usaha dari bawah, mengajarkan Haira menjadi wanita tangguh. Setelah beberapa waktu berlalu, Ammar yang melihat kesungguhan Haira tanpa sadar menyukai Haira, dan Haira pun memiliki perasaan yang sama menyukai Ammar, karena kepedulianya terhadap warga kurang mampu. Namun, karena kesalahan Haira diawal pertemuan, ia pernah membohongi mamih dari Ammar, menjadikan Ammar dan Haira tidak direstui oleh keluarga Ammar, terutama oleh mamih. Lagi-lagi Haira harus membuktikan bahwa ia layak dijadikan menantu oleh keluarga Ammar. Meskipun jalan yang Haira lewati untuk memperjuangkan hubunganya dengan Ammar terjal. Ia akan tetap optimis bahwa kebahagiaan akan selalu menjadi milik orang-orang yang sabar. Bisakah Haira membuktikan bahwa ia adalah gadis yang baik dan pantas untuk menjadi istri Ammar?

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Heyyo author here again, Noticed that I STILL make a ton of mistakes like forgetting a word, missing a word, butchering spellings and even writing sentences that make no sense. I downloaded Grammarly to my phone like 2 days ago so that helped reduce the amount of mistakes I made, but Grammarly has a hard time detecting when a word is either missing or when a dialogue symbol is missing or when a sentence makes no sense. I will be going back to revise my previous chapters to try and fix them when I have time, but sadly I got little free time AND even if I did, I would still miss some of these mistakes So here's the IMPORTANT bit, please comment any typo you find, any sentences that feel off/like you don't get it, any spelling mistakes, any Name mistakes. I try to keep my novels clean from those simple mistakes, but there's only so much my eyes can notice. Sorry again for dishing out chapter after chapter all filled with mistakes. I am not gonna tell you to expect me to change instantly, I'mm 100% sure there will be mistakes in the next chapter and probably the next still. It's my first time writing so hopefully over time I learn how to avoid typing as much mistakes and learn how to notice errors when I revise more. accurately.

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=====SOME WORDS FROM THE AUTHOR===== Heyyo! Author here making a review since all this would be too much for the synopsis. Just want to let you all know that this is my 2nd attempt at TRYING to turn writing into a hobby. So I'm pretty sure you all have seen this kind of synopsis before so I'm just gonna be direct: -I have 0 writing experience AND 0 social communication skills so expect some bad attempts at jokes, romance or just normal conversations. I grew up being good at neither of those IRL ;-; . Please point out when something just sounds too forced or too cringey. -This novel is inspired by The webnovel: Villain Retirement by Romeru. It's an awesome novel if you're into some extreme gore and violence with some comedy in it then go check it out. -PLEASE point out any typos or grammar errors because whenever I find one, I can actually just forget about it instantly. And if you see some dialouge and think it could be written better, then please share your suggestion in the comments because in my head I think you readers got better english than I do despite me growing up speaking english the majority of my life. -Unlike Villain Retirement, the MC will not talk like a robot but instead be an actual normal kid that doesn't try and kill any living person he sees straight away. Only similarities is that he has something rough going on in their heads that screws their thinking and sense morality, for John this happens slowly as the story progresses and no I am not talking about Riley being in the spectrum but something else. -Schedule of release? I'll try and force myself to write 1 chapter a day just to develop the habit but the time of when I upload is random at the moment since I got some school stuff to deal with if I want to graduate. For now all I can say is that I will be uploading around in the afternoons or evenings of where I live. When I have more free time then i might have a better upload schedule. Abd yeah that's about all I can think of. Please take some time to read read and hopefully enjoy!

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