A Collection of Criticism

If you want me to save him, sleep with me

That day, he hugged me, his hand on my waist, forced me against the hard cold desk: “ Want to help Him, sleep with me!” I can only beg: "don't ejaculation in my body, please..." The man pinched my chin with his powerful fingers, angry and hateful: "don't make me laugh, and you deserve to be pregnant with my child?You are not qualified to conceive a child that belongs to me." I knew that from the moment,when I personally reported his father and sent to prison, he won't forgive me. He won't let me leave him for the rest of his life."

Derelict: A tale of happy ghosts

Nobody knew what started the fire but it destroyed the whole of Suckersbend neighbourhood leaving her as the only survivor. Twenty three years later, she now owns her own thriving company. A new neighbourhood is built over the ruins of Suckersbend and she resolutely decides that she must get a house there. She wants the house built over her former home but realises that a new home was never built over it and the derelict building still stands. She meets a couple of ghosts who manipulate her to do their will, a young girl who she relates to, her brothers best friend who nobody knows is still alive and she becomes the only one that can give Suckersbend a happy ending. Nb synopsis may change as story progresses.

Eating Out

When Lara Bennett is called for a job interview, the last person she expects to run into is her old high school sweetheart. She hasn’t seen Meredith in years, having lost touch when they headed off to different colleges. Meeting up with her again after all this time reignites feelings Lara thought long buried.<br><br>Meredith Marshall owns Marshall Ad Agency. When she saw Lara’s resume, she hoped it belonged to the girl she first fell in love with as a teen, and she isn’t disappointed when Lara shows up for the interview.<br><br>After work, Meredith invites Lara to dinner. Things heat up between them at the restaurant, reminding the women how right they used to be together. Can Lara land the job -- and Meredith’s heart, too?

Miss Not so Typical: Consider me Humored (GL)

Ginny Green, an aromantic nerd, accidentally slept with the infamous campus Princess, Persephone Campbell, but she can't remember. ** Ginny Green is an aromantic nerd who only believes that love only exists in movies and novels, but still wishes to find that special someone even though she's thinking that it's impossible. After she got drunk at a party, she found herself tangled in bed with the infamous campus Princess, Persephone Campbell. Persephone Campbell is an extremely attractive, charismatic, misjudged individual due to her wealthy background. Deemed by the people as coldhearted and a snob, but she's totally the opposite. She fell in love with Ginny after their faithful night together and would love to start a relationship with her. But there is a problem, Ginny is aromantic and doesn't want to be in a relationship with anyone. Now, Persephone is on a mission to make the aromantic nerd fall in love with her. ** "You're not going to run away and walk out of this room and pretend that this didn't happen, are you?" In every accidental one-night stand, of course, that thought is not an option anymore. Embrace each other at night like long-time lovers, and in the morning, shrug off every memory like it never happened. That's always been the case. And of course, that was Ginny's initial plan after assessing the situation. But looking at Persephone's threatening, yet smiling face, she knows well how screwed up she was. Let's just laugh first. "N-no, I wasn't thinking of that at all." "Good." Persephone smiled, satisfied with her answer. She gingerly moves closer to Ginny, wrapping both of her arms around her waist. Ginny can't seem to utter a single word. Seeing a naked Persephone in front of her was... was... was - she doesn't even have any words to describe it. ** This story is slowburn that contains fluff and will contain some mature scenes soon.

通天药神

游戏中的异样人生，波澜壮阔，有名有利有自由！人生里的游戏，敢爱敢恨，敢闯敢干！炼药制药，财源滚滚，有情有义，情义激荡，畅想未来，璀璨夺目，成就传奇！

Historia Cancelada.

Historia Cancelada.

Unfathomable Doomsday

First, this isn’t a story about how to seek survival during Doomsday! It’s rather about how to bring about the end of of times, to bring down the curtain on the world. It’s about how to set off a Zombie frenzy, how to lead the Devil into invasion, and how to guide the descent of Zerg! In this game of doom, I’m the source of everything! Second, I need to thank those brethren who accompanied me until now. My thanks go to the Lich Monarch, Arthas Menethil (game: World of Warcraft), bringer of endless winter and death; to Alex Mercer (game: Prototype), who created life by consuming viruses; to the Worst Spirit Tokisaki Kurumi (Light Novel: Date a Live), controller of time; to the Magus Ascendant Xerath (Game: League of Legends), imprisoned by runes. Ladies and Gentlemen, lets bring about a carnival of doom! This is just a copy-paste from another site so it does not come from me. The real author is here : https://www.mtlnovel.com/novel-author/jiejiedexinniang/ The translator is : System Translation Here is their pa?eon if you wish to support them : pa*eon/systemtranslation [WARNING NOTICE] If the original author or the translator are dissatisfied they can tell me and I will delete the book.

29-Years-Old Bachelor Was… Brought to a Different World to Live

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ME AND MY DOCKTOR

••••• Ada hal yang terasa berat sekali untuk di lalui, tapi tetap harus di lalui. terasa sulit sekali diterima tapi tetap harus di terima. hidup kadang suka kelewatan dalam memberi sesuatu ••••• Aku Nafisya Kaila Syam, hidup dalam berbagai masalah yang kemudian mengantarkan ku pada ke bahagian. Dan teruntuk , untuk kamu. yang sudah mengantarkan kebahagian padaku. aku ingin menjadikan mu sebagai salah satu dari kebahagian yang ku perolehan darimu. maka izinkan lah aku untuk kau jadikan pelengkap dari kekurangan yang ada pada dirimu.

Eyes of the Killer Moon

Princess Hybrid

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The Fittest Survive

Discontinued! A young girl and her struggles to survive in a cruel world where the strong thrive and the weak are crush underfoot. This is fiction. Any resemblance to real life is just a coincidence. Constructive criticism is welcomed. Just a warning, my updates will be sporadic but I will try to update at least once per week. One thing I promise is I won't abandoned this story without putting up a notification. I hate it when people just abandon a story and don't at least let people know they stopped.

God Of Lightning

Worldwide Class change: I am a Summoner

When the game became reality, the real world was overrun with a large number of monsters. In the wild, there were many dungeons and secret realms available. As the world entered the era of global class change, people could choose to level up by slaying monsters and changing their classes. On the day of class change, Daniel Davis became an honorable summoner. Before he could celebrate, he was dumbfounded when he noticed his skill panel. “Summoning full-level BOSS 12-winged Fallen Angel; summoning full-level BOSS Seven Deadly Sins Demon King; summoning full-level BOSS Dragon of Destruction.” “What happened to level 1 skeleton soldiers and level 1 zombies they promised? What the hell! How come I can only summon bosses?” However, as Daniel Davis' level continued to increase and he continued to change classes, he realized that things didn't seem to be that simple! On the skill panel, forbidden options such as Summon Angel, Odin appeared...

网游重生之邪骑传说

蝌蚪新书《创世游戏法典》2019年2月底上传，求包养。 本书简介：这是一个重生后携带着前世死灵法师记忆能够召唤出骷髅海的圣骑士在游戏内外叱咤风云的传奇故事。 　　圣骑士，神话世界的宠儿，却有着种种限制，修心修身，沐浴圣光，非特殊情况不可击杀同类；当这两者合二为一融入己身之时，林浩宇又该何去何从？

The MARVEL System

This story follows a MARVEL addict named Chi Li... Chi Li lives in our world and just like most people, he likes superheroes or to be more specific MARVEL and one day he is reading a comic book like usual but he is more into it than normal and starts crossing the road, little does he know there is a drunk person driving a truck and doesn't notice Chi Li and let's just say truck kun has isekaid another person... Which 10 MARVEL superpowers will Chi Li choose Will Chi Li be able to survive in this new world? find out by reading this novel!!!

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The Good boy x The Bad boy

This story is about a boy named Xander, Xander has a dark past which is lead by abuse from his father after his mother had died in a car accident. Before Xander was being mentally and physically abused by his father he had met his best friend Antonio as a child after the accident. Some year's past by and Xander is now a junior in high school when him and Antonio meet again but will it be the same as they were children or different or will them meeting again end in vain.

顾医生的小娇妻回来了

叶星辰在顾尘无度宠爱的婚姻里依然对前男友念念不忘，在顾尘同意离婚的时候，遭到报应被无良的前男友二度抛弃

My Life on Another World.

I got reincarnated into a new world it seems and now I'm living a new life adventuring this new world.

Stars of Freedom

The world, full of monsters and people who can summon weapons at will. We find different groups of people struggling as unforeseen circumstances interrupt their daily lives.

A Lost Generation-The third world station

The story of World War III and the life of Laura Whiting's great great great great great grandfather, Mark Whiting, during the bloodiest of human conflicts. The first of the Greenies/A Perfect World universe, started some years ago and never posted, now recently picked up and re-written. Some dates have been shifted forward in the timeline by a few years.

The Tale Of The Mythic God With A System

Author." Just saying everything in this WebNovel/Fanfic is not what it seems so read closer or you might miss something important." ------------- Let me tell you a Tale of the Mythic God a being so powerful that he can casually create and destroy anything with a single thought. Zander Cross you're an 'everyday' handsome abnormal genius with an IQ of 202 was going to play some CS:GO on his PC because he was bored but couldn't as right when he clicked the game icon on his desktop he blacked out. I welcome you on this exciting, dangerous, ride with me as we solve the mystery of the one called "Mythic God". We're be going to worlds that you call fanfiction like " Naruto" " Dragon ball super" Harry Potter" Or some random "ISEKAI World" and probably a "Cultivator World" to kill or be a Young Master. So as I say one last time, I welcome you once again because once you entered, you will be in for one of hell of a ride, hahahahaha!!! Indra Ōtsutsuki." Hahahahaha! I'm alive!!!" Zander Cross." Tsk! Indra what are you doing?" Indra." Zan I'm just having some fun! You usually don't let me out." Zander." Still, calling me that nickname huh? Well, Whatever. The reason I don't let you out is because we usually get in a fight that will last forever. Battles that take too long are usually boring, so I will always find the fastest way to end it." ------------- [Ding!!! Truck-sama has joined the Chat!] ------------ Ark 1 - The Beginning Of The Tale Of The Mythic God! World (1) - A New World That Zander created himself. Anime World (1) Fate Universe! .....kind of? Update Time - When I feel like writing. At most 2 to 3 times a week and could 1 day because of school being an ass. World Count - 2,000! At most 3,000! If I'm in a good mood then 4,000! I am a beginner writer, so, please don't mind if there are some basic mistakes especially some grammar and sentence structure. Ps: I do not own anime, manga, and novels mentioned in this novel I only own my OC or OC's. This is just a fanfiction:) PS From The Author - " The clover is not mine, I just edited a little with some Author true magic." (Extra Tags) --- God MC#1 Emotionless MC#2 Chat Group#3 Dimensional God/Goddess Realm#4 Fate Grand Order Servants#5 Cold And Ruthless MC#6 War#7 Empire/Kingdom Building#8

BTTH: Starting With Auctioning Green Lotus Core Flame

English translation of the BTTH fanfic under the same title with 700+ chapters upon completion. --- Li Xiao, an ordinary young man from Earth, suddenly crossed over to world of "Break Through The Heaven" and obtained godly auction system where rare and precious items could be auctioned off to earn wealth which then would be converted into system points, allowing him to buy various skills and techniques from the shop. Heavenly Flames, Heavenly Cauldrons, Dou God-level Dou Techniques, rare Heaven and Earth treasures... nothing couldn't be found in Heaven Ascending Pavilion! When Xiao Yan, the future Flame Emperor, and many powerhouses were still vying the inheritance of Tou She Ancient God, Li Xiao was already standing at the apex of Dou Qi Continent! --- Disclaimer: I don't own the cover image. If you are the owner and want me to remove it, kindly leave a comment on the comment or review section. MTL: https://www.69shuba.pro/book/50697.html

Book 1: Snow Princess

(I do not own the picture in the book title) Hello if you read my story you will know my name. Let me give you a summary of it. I ended up lost in the woods somewhere and this nice family found me. A week later I return home and what do I find? You will have to read and find out. Hope you like it. Wink wink

yo this is my first time trying something like this.

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It's Me Vanya

Bagaimana jadinya jika Vanya si cewek bar-bar berpindah jiwa ke tubuh gadis lemah dan sering di tindas keluarga maupun temannya di sekolah. "apa yang terjadi?,gue dimana?"Vanya kebingungan ketiaka ia mendapati dirinya berada disebuah gudang yang kumuh dan kotor. "bukannya tadi gue kecelakaan ya?"tanya pada dirinya sendiri,ya Vanya baru saja mengalami kecelakaan akibat balapan,ada yang sengaja menyabotase motornya sehingga rem motornya tidak berfungsi. BRAKK! Vanya terlonjak kaget akibat dobraka yang keras,ia menatap sosok yang membuatnya kaget. "sudah bangun ternyata, gimana hadiah yang gue kasih buat lo menarik?"ucap seorang perempuan dengan tersenyum smirk. "Keisha?"siapa perempuan itu mengapa ia memanggil dirinya Keisha?. Baca selengkapnya hanya disini. Karya Asli dan karya pertama. Typo bertebaran!

The True Dragon (TenSura – Hiatus)

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the time mia killed me

Naruto: "the story of a hyūga"

A girl with great talent is born in the hyūga clan, her advancement through the shinobi world treats chaos or brings peace, hanami was born in the hyūga clan with a very pure lineage. (This story does not go up reincarnation or transmigration, there will be no system or anything related, the story will take place during the Canon of the Naruto series) (his appearance is the cover)

New Universe, New Me?

A certain Man soul got transferred to another universe. Learning the new environment, understanding the new language what will be in store for him in this new world?

'i will make you pay for what you did to me'

Replication system

*A regular programmer with a copying power has traveled Into a mysterious cultivation world.He founds out that he can copy any pills or spirit stones to provide his cultivation. All he needs to do is rubbing his thumb and index finger together!In our world,Copying and pasting is just a piece of code in a computer program, but if this code appear in this world...what is he going to do? Could he defeat his enemies and make his own legend?

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