A great story with great entertainment. The last chapter twist was extraordinary and unexpected. Keep it green. I know the story is not finished yet because there are some more main characters. You mentioned them in first chapter. Honestly I like this story. Sci fi elements are great. The world building is superior.
Amazing story. I need other volumes.. You are an great author.. Your story will get a massive audience one day man. Keep cooking man. We need volume 2... I know this story is not over because you introduced lot of stuffs in chapter 1. Simply it's an absolute masterpiece..
Honestly I like this story. Can you please upload the other volumes because you mentioned if this story become famous you will upload vol2. I want vol2 just upload it then only story will get famous.. I liked the character developments especially kem and tadashi. First 4 chapters is slow but it's the heart of the story. From chapter 5 the story reached its heat. Great action, great Sci fi, great pacing, great emotional hook, great and unexpected twist, great writing.Damn it's a very good story greensoarrow. Keep it up. But update or upload other chapters soon that's why I gave 3 stars for updating stability . I want to see other volumes
