Jauary John

I hope everyone will enjoy my work. I will try my best to make it better.

These are good but we need more horrifying moments. Consider introducing eerie settings, unexpected twists, and building suspense with chilling details. Amplify the fear factor by delving into characters' fears and vulnerabilities. Creating a sense of dread can enhance the overall horror experience.

great story, but you need to add more horror elements into it

Since the story said to be a fantasy and going as a horror story I'm giving you four stars

I like this story so i gave you power stone and popularity.

nice story. keep up the good work. expecting for more episodes

You better read more novels like these to improve your style of writing.

The world background is a little mystery in this story. I have a feeling that it is similar to ours.

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Your story is compelling, but refining your English could enhance its impact. Consider incorporating additional content into each episode to heighten the overall intrigue and engagement. Still, I'm giving you 5 stars to encourage you. Good luck.

keep up the good work. better work on your grammar though.[img=update]

I love the idea, I hope that you can add some more interesting elements to the story to keep it engaging.

Expecting more thrilling events and twists

I love possession based novels. but you need to add more details about how they get possessed and what they do after getting possessed.

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I think this is interesting is it horror or fantasy

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Esta es una historia lenta pero emocionante, especialmente cuando llega a los últimos capítulos. Muy impresionante.

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Is this novel competing in WSA 2024? Please reply.