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After a huge string of customers desperate for a taxi, Hyejin was finally able to return and continue to stalk.
She'd heard Mark's laughs and unnecessary comments throughout her walk around town; he really was going to get a cut in his pay that month.
Eunji didn't have a very interesting life if you just followed the time she went in and out of work. Could a girl really live so boringly?
Hyejin had enough time to eat lunch, watch a movie, and still had time to talk to her weapons supplier. She was really looking forward to receiving her new acquisition: 7.62 Tkiv 85. What could she do? Weapons were so beautiful and interesting; she wanted them all.
When Eunji finally showed up and left the building, it was past 9 pm, and the delay was so long that to disguise it, Hyejin was forced to go around the perimeter of the building several times to disguise that she was watching Young Kim.
Eunji was again driving the car and she wasn't cautious and didn't even use tactics to confuse anyone who wanted to follow her.
Mark was already on his third cup of coffee; he couldn't sleep until Hyejin released him. Yes, the night would be long. Or maybe day? Who knows.
Eunji went to the same bar as the night before. She got out of the car without the slightest bit of caution.
Hyejin stared at the young girl disappearing from her field of vision and let out a loud sigh.
Mark was anxious and curious. How was she going to act? Maybe he should make popcorn, right?
"What are you going to do?"
"Be still, I'm thinking."
She knew that bar was a place where they would probably only have rich and influential people. She was probably exposing herself more than she should have, but was it worth it?
She quickly ripped open her pants and ripped a few buttons from her blouse.
Mark was startled by Jeon's sudden action. "What are you going to do?"
"I'm making some modifications to the taxi driver outfit."
Hyejin knew that she couldn't go in there dressed in any way and simply decided to do the best she could with what she had. At that moment, she had a lot of hate and thirst for destruction.
She ripped pants into short shorts and with what was left of fabric wrapped around her waist, making a fake skirt, and a scarf to tie around her neck. The blouse wasn't sexy, but showing off her cleavage would help a little.
She grabbed her purse that was hidden under the seat and grabbed her leather jacket and her pair of red heels.
She quickly ruffled her hair, giving it a slightly natural, wavy look, and subtly painted her mouth with a strong red lipstick.
She stared at her reflection in the bedroom's tiny rearview mirror... Yes, that was enough for now.
She parked the taxi in a position further away from the bar and walked for five minutes to the bar. Finally, she would face Eunji head-on.
The bar was packed, mostly with men in suits. A woman was singing a soft jazz tune. Eunji was sitting in a far corner of the bar and was talking animatedly with the bartender.
Hyejin could feel her heart racing; she was so close to ending it all and finally getting one more job done. She sighed in her heart; she needed to be patient.
"Are you the new girl?"
Hyejin barely managed to take five steps into the bar and was quickly approached and dragged by the arm to a place away from most of the customers.
Jeon was confused by that situation. "New girl?"
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Mark was listening intently to that conversation and quickly did some research on what they might be wanting to say to her. "Apparently, this bar is known for having girls who are willing to do anything for money..."
Hyejin finally understood. Okay. This was beyond what she was willing to do for Eunji's neck.
"Yes, they said you just arrived in the capital, don't play dumb."
Hyejin offered her best smile and used all her acting skills to go unnoticed by that woman. She couldn't be discovered. "Oh, sure, sorry I haven't gotten used to it yet."
The woman frowned a little annoyed, she should have arrived over an hour ago, but whatever, she was there now. "Right. I'm Mi Joo and if you want to be one of my girls you need to hook a good client, the bar is at your disposal you have 3 hours."
Yes, Mi Joo was waiting for her new batch of girls, but only that strange girl showed up. So irritating.
Mark laughed to the point of choking. "Hye-jin, you are apparently going to sell your body in exchange for the perfect crime."
Hyejin just rolled her eyes, how could he be so annoying? The situation was complicated... Now she needed to act like a call girl and get someone willing to pay for her services so that she could at least be in the same environment as Eunji.
She took a deep breath and walked over to the bar. "Well, nothing a little alcohol won't help."
Hyejin stared at the large bar and many customers looked ready to be hooked, but she decided to gamble high and go straight to the target.
Jeon was a very attractive woman and several pairs of eyes were mesmerized, ready to devour her.
Eunji hadn't even noticed the strange presence next to her and was quietly drinking her whiskey until she heard a voice hovering around her.
"Goodnight."
Eunji stared at her and just took a sip of her drink, the girl was pretty, but she didn't like to interact much with strangers... Or with acquaintances.
She didn't like interacting with anyone.
Mark looked forward to any sign of Eunji, should he feel funny or scared? Hyejin couldn't fail the plan.
Hyejin laughed at young Kim's silence and touched the glass that Eunji had just been holding. She finally got Kim's watchful eyes on her.
It was a rebellious act that she needed.
She brought the drink to her lips, leaving a generous mark of lipstick on the rim of the glass.
"I arrived in the city a short time ago, but it really makes me curious that people don't know how to speak here..."
Hyejin handed the cup to Eunji.
Little Kim looked at her intently and smiled, drinking the rest of the alcohol in the glass. She generously touched her lips over the lipstick mark left by Jeon.
An indirect kiss should be a good sign, right?
"What do you want me to say to you?"
Eunji liked a disobedient woman. She smiled, feeling funny.
Hyejin touched Eunji's face and smiled. "Pure whiskey is always a good option, but you seem sweeter."
Eunji could feel her face heat up, was that the effect of the alcohol or that woman?! She chuckled, feeling ready to pounce like a fox facing a small lost sheep from the flock.
Hyejin smiled, satisfied, she was going to make that woman crawl for her. "Well, I made you laugh."
Kim sighed and gestured for him to hand her another glass of drink. "You're just being stupid and this cup is mine."
"Well then, buy me a drink and I'll have my own cup."
Eunji smiled at Hyejin's audacity.
She wasn't used to having people staring at her so easily.
"What's your name?"
"I can have whatever name you want."
"Okay, what do you want to drink?"
Heyjin stared at the exposed bottles and in less than five seconds, he made up his mind. "Martini sounds good."
Eunji agreed and placed her order along with hers. "For a country girl, you know about drinks... Make a martini for the girl and a whiskey for me."
Mi Joo followed their interaction as she talked to one of her customers.
Was that rookie so good that Eunji spoke to her so naturally?
She felt sour in her heart.
Jeon liked to make herself intimate, that's how her character would act in front of Eunji.
It would be rough and sticky and slippery.
It would be the sweet poison that Eunji would be delighted to taste.
Hyejin let her knees touch Eunji's, leaning on the counter only to get even closer to the woman in front of her.
"Maybe I'm not such an innocent girl."
Young Kim seemed to like it.
She smiled, satisfied.
Eunji glanced at her watch and it was already late enough for her to go back to her hotel room. She picked up her glass of drink and downed it at once, feeling the liquid go down her throat, warming her.
"You're interesting... See you around."
Eunji was a known client of the owner and she didn't need to give much satisfaction if she would pay the bill or not, she would later solve it with Mi Joo.
Hyejin watched Eunji get up and she quickly grabbed her wrist. What was she supposed to do now that her target was ready to get out there and worse, get out alive. "Wait."
Hyejin quickly grabbed a paper napkin and a pen and started scribbling something.
She softly approached Eunji, they were so close that it was possible to smell the strong scent of alcohol mixed with perfume.
Eunji felt warm breath hit her face.
She smiled, funny, that girl was very interesting.
She walked slowly away from there, while Hyejin watched her walk away enjoying the taste of her martini.
Yeah, Eunji was probably sweeter.