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'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms

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What is 'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms

WebNovel で公開されている、squirtle_sqaud_z の作者が書いた 'The One Punch Girl' In Nine Deadly Realms の小説を読んでください。' The One Punch Girl' is the strongest Female super Hero ever in Female Lead. Often She finishes her opponents in one punch. She is immortal But doesn't Know that . The Earth's Immortal system has se...

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' The One Punch Girl' is the strongest Female super Hero ever in Female Lead. Often She finishes her opponents in one punch. She is immortal But doesn't Know that . The Earth's Immortal system has sent her to earth for sake of defending the World by many aliens . Despite being a busy division leader, there she will be pretend to be a student ,will be Giving tests , capturing monsters , deals with human relationships and resolving conflicts between different species. Find Out how she deals with it , from the first chapter.

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DaoistylZQaM · 都市
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Becoming a dungeon core

There will be mistakes as this is my first time writing. Talk - " " Think - [ ] System - ( ) Author thought - [[ ]] Action - * * In a massive world, many times larger than Earth. Is filled with gods, magic, hundreds of intelligent species, dragons, orcs, goblins, and more monsters and beasts. Yet, they all point swords at each other. This world is made up of several massive continents. Most of these continents are on the brink of war or already in war. Yet some continents somehow find peace with each other. But other than that, this world is mostly stable. But that all changes when souls from different times, dimensions, galaxies, and universes, somehow end up in their world, either being summoned to stop some kind of demon king, reincarnated, or transmigrated. These souls change the balance of the world, either for the good or bad, always leaving a mark on history. Though these foreign souls that are not summoned are really rare, maybe 2 come every thousand years, as summoned ones are called by the gods and people during a time of need. But what would happen when a soul comes to this world, with a powerful ability, one that can change the entire balance of the world? Most would expect this type of soul to be a powerful dragon or a newly born god, yet most wouldn't expect the soul to be a small crystal rock the size of a blueberry. This soul will have a tough time trying to grow strong, especially since many more reincarnated, transmigrated, or summoned souls are popping out everywhere. With numerous foreign souls unintentionally traversing through the fissures of space and time into this new world, what prevents foreign entities from following suit? What safeguards are in place to prevent their invasion of the new world?

whatisthisname · ファンタジー
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57 Chs

[Rewriting]

Once upon a time, in a world where magic of all kind becomes the norm, our main characters struggle to be good guys. They were thrown down the path of grief, pain, and hatred, going unsaved by what modern society calls heroes. Instead, the mysterious leader of an even more unheard of organization reached out to them. The leader promised only what their souls desired. In return, they offered their service in any requested manner. Who would've known that the leader would request one to run a bar in the junkiest part of town, one to trap the city's so-called high class citizens in drug ring, and one to travel every inch of the globe with an unspecified goal in mind? Matthew, the bar owner, is more clueless than any other. He wants nothing more than a peaceful life, somewhat what he has been given. Except, as the new year comes and goes, he finds himself desiring more than the peace and quiet. He wants to find love... At the same time, so does a suspiciously recognizable woman. She is completely unknown and doesn't hesitate to push his buttons. Matthew can find out nothing about her identity, not even when his has the organization look into her.. They only know one thing: She's dangerous to everything they've built. But Matthew finds himself liking her danger, then finds himself tangled in her bed... How does he plan to keep this a secret? *** Reworking the original plot because I wasn't committed to it. This will be much better! Note: Slow updates! I'll try to update every 1 or 2 weeks (chapters will be shorter as well).

Aspen_OverTheSun · ファンタジー
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Chasing Olivia.

Olivia Parker is an ordinary twenty-four year old girl with absolutely no ties to the underworld, the mafia but little did she know about the deal her father had made with the devil. Ginger head, freckled-face and oceanic blue orbs was how people saw her but there was so much underneath it. Those eyes led onto very little but look deeper and find the true Olivia Parker. Oh yes, she is a businesswoman and a part-time investigative journalist. Alessandro Valentini was what the common people call, The Mafia. The King. The Death. But was he just that? He commanded respect, he was the king in any room he walked into and most certainly was synonymous to fear. But most of all, he was a man of his word. A true Valentini. A word is what that got Olivia Parker and Alessandro Valentini together but how far will they go? Valentini may be the Mafia King but Parker was not a pushover and most certainly was not to be tamed, for all, no one can tame a lioness. ^^^^^^^^ " You will obey me mio amore." " Oh you can dream on because that is never going to happen." Olivia announced to the king and no one talks to the king like that. " Do you know the consequences of your actions Piccola?" He asked, his voice ice-cold as he took a step forward. " Only if I were afraid. If only." She mocked, her temper rising as she rolled her eyes and walked out on the Mafia King. Another thing no can could dare to do before her but then again, who's best to keep the King in check if not his Queen?

thegirlnextdoor27 · 都市
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Base Wars: Gacha System

Welcome to Eteria, where limitless power is within reach for those lucky and daring enough to seize it! Embark on an epic journey in a base building survival game, where every skill, weapon, and character is just a button press away. SKILL GACHA: Unleash fireballs, master concealment, or wield calamitous powers - try your luck for powerful skills! EQUIPMENT GACHA: Arm yourself with swords, bows, or spears of destruction - discover potent gear with a single spin! CHARACTER GACHA: Summon your dream team - rogues, warriors, mages, builders, or even a sun-powered female knight - all at your fingertips! Build your paradise - a haven for your characters, an impregnable fortress, or an unstoppable empire. The choice is yours, and who will challenge you? Other players? But power is not just for show. Team up with your summoned companions, conquer rival bases, slay foes, and plunder skills and equipment to enhance your might! Recruit fallen players' summoned characters to expand your empire even further. Conquer, kill, loot - rise in power and perhaps ascend to godhood. The ultimate question: Can you survive until then? Join Eteria now and test your mettle in a world where power awaits those bold enough to claim it! ••••• "Ding!" "Welcome to the world of Eteria, Player number 42069." "Build your base and conquer others. But beware, for they will come for you." In the throes of illness, John Smith's dying wish opens the door to a new existence. Transported in a world where Gacha reigns supreme, he discovers a mysterious voice has granted him the power of Gacha Fusion—a unique skill enabling him to combine gacha rewards for unimaginable power. As John navigates this realm, a system lets him draw for skills, equipment, and characters. His Gacha companions, complete with life, classes, and purpose, pledge unwavering loyalty to their lord. Yet, the price of power becomes apparent as John is thrust into a grand survival game. Betrayal and exploitation lurk around every corner, forcing John to rely solely on his summoned Gacha Characters for trust. In a world shaped by luck and resourcefulness, John rises above the challenges. As the dawn approaches with apathy and fearlessness, he builds an empire, determined to construct the most powerful base of all. The survival game has begun, and John Smith is ready to conquer. ••••• Posting Schedule: Monday through Friday. Chapter Length: 2500 Minimum.

Koizumi_ · ファンタジー
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Cindersen
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Whoa. How did this get so many votes when the story is inspired by One Punch Man and this isn't a fan fiction inspired contest? Not to mention, it has poor writing with frequent lack of proper capitalization, punctuation, and overall correct sentence structure. The mistakes are so blatantly obvious that it makes me wonder if the reviewers who gave this such high ratings are in elementary school or something. My advice would be to use Grammarly or learn how to write better basic English because this grammar is pretty bad and detracts from any semblance of a story. I would have given you a one, but you tried, so two for effort. I hope you take my advice seriously in order to improve your story and writing.

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AuroraAzure
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Umm.. I'm only here because the author commented to me on IRAS randomly to check out their novel. It was out of the blue since it was off of a balloon gift comment of mine, but I was curious and checked it out anyway. But the writing is just okay for me? I'm not into anime and I can't follow the story well because I think the formatting got messed up? Oh well you told me to check it out so I did. Good luck with your story I suppose? 😅 Sorry I can't give more feedback because I can't follow the story that well, and it's only 4 chapters long...... Guerilla advertising on translated novels is probably not a good idea haha. I was surprised by the reply. 😆

julis
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Sorry but I expected better from a story voted third in the contest. Writing mistakes are all over the place. It doesn't even look like it's being seriously written because sentences are cut off before the end and appear on another paragraph. Grammar is completely off. That just shows lack of care for properly typing and reviewing your work before uploading. There are other stories which at least proofread their work better than this. The story is also based off one punch man, so it's not really original like the other stories too. This is just my honest opinion. If I were to give you a real score on what this story deserves, it would be a 1-2 star max, no offense. Keep writing and studying proper English to get better. But I have a feeling that once this contest is over, you're just going to drop this story like many others who just join the contest for the SS prize. But I hope you do continue so that you can get better.

RedNight
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I am giving you four to encourage you, and this rating in no way reflects on the story itself. If you want me to give you a honest rating, it would be one, and this one rating is due to your desire to write. Write more, learn more, from a fellow author who started at the bottom just like you.

Kalindi_Dalvi_8389
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Amazing writting quality almost no spelling mistakes Stability of updating is also good enough for 5 stars And story development is better than first chapter and The mc's development was very nice. And world background was awesome👏✊👍👏✊👍 pretty awesome book.

squirtle_sqaud_z
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The one punch girl series is best and her immense power is very important and also she is female lead so The one punch girl series is best and her immense power is very important and also she is female lead so

kkiyumno
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I saw the author comment on many novels to check out his novel, so I did. The grammar made the novel so hard to read that I could barely understand anything. Also, the idea of combining multiple different animes and stories doesn’t sit well with me. The contest is not fan fiction. Many supporters say that the grammar mistakes are a unique ‘style’, but I think they’re just mistakes. I would suggest proofreading your chapters more, checking grammar, and ensuring that it’s easier to understand what’s happening and more detail.

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Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !! Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !! Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !! Amazing and best story written by him must read must read !!

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terminerfers_TM
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You should try my novel one punch girl you will love it You should try my novel one punch girl you will love it You should try my novel one punch girl you will love it

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Vijay_Tawde
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!!!! I am speechless !!!!Amazing it's super super super amazing I like one punch girl series very much and world background also good nothing more to say but I will contribute to make it win the contest

vaman_dalvi
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Really awesome must try very nice that's all dabura is my favorite Really awesome must try very nice that's all dabura is my favorite Really awesome must try very nice that's all dabura is my favorite

MarcoDao
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It's not bad of a story, the author has a lot of chapters written which is very commendable I believe. The major issue I have though is that there's not much in the way of decent sentence construction or punctuation making the reading experience very messy. I'm sure English is not the author's first language so I'd recommend him to get someone to help him edit before publishing. Other than that: your premise is good, but it relies too much on me knowing comic books and Anime references of which I only know about half of those things. I'd suggest that you make an original character/villain or two and maybe explain how all the universes appeared in this earth (unless I missed a chapter or two then don't worry about this). Otherwise yeah

Bittu_Dada
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Amazingly awesome its dope bro most savage book ever read its very nice all since the prolouge to all the chaps ahead must have 5 stars and also support of power stone you should also give him piwer stone trust me its worth it......

Kshitij_Tawde
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Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read Amazing must read

Rutuja_Tawde
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Awesome must read and update Speed very much high must take rest Awesome must read and update Speed very much highmust take rest Awesome must read and update Speed very much highmust take rest

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