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Stage 2 Initializing : Welcome To Planet Iris (Dropped)

Stage 2 initialized. All intelligent life forms were transported into a new world. Planet Iris. Civilization reverted back into their primal state. An Apocalyptic era. With the planet is filled with animals that are strong enough to be a natural disasters. Danger zones filled with unknown abilities. Unmarked areas and unknown danger levels. And a shameless system, that acts like a tower defense simulator... Constantly creating waves of new disasters into life. Which some permanently stay. ------------------------------------------------ Wait our lives are just a simulation? What's this about Stage 2? Ugh, why did Earth get destroyed? Why are we on a bigger planet? Shouldn’t the gravity crush us? Why for goodness sake are their game settings now? Those things are mutants? What difficulty is this on? Why... Wait... Everything's gone now… Civilization is no more, Earth is no more, Governments are gone, My loved ones, are they safe? In this place with no rules... -------------------------------------------------- Author Notes- My first novel was written for an writing prompt competition (#45 Apocalpyse) but I had lost. I even didn't hit a runner up. The bottom place runner up had about 700 words, but I still lost with like 14-15k word count. I'm guessing my start was too slow, but I honestly don't get how I did not even make one of the empty spots at least. Since I don't like the genre that much and lost too making me salty, I'm just going to drop this. Maybe in the future I will pick up but I doubt it. For the READERS THAT STAYED, the plot was basically going to follow Shakespeare's Othello, with Yu building up a betrayal, Jess cheating, and other stuff that won't be mentioned for sake of time and in case I pick up again. Ty for the few that supported me. *Check out my other novel- 'Creator of Legends : The Evolution Tree', it is for another writing prompt contest, but unlike this novel, I specialize in that type of writing so it will probably be a few levels above this novel.*

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