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WebNovel で公開されている、LittleVacon の作者が書いた [DROPPED!] の小説を読んでください。Rewritten: Loki: God of Tricksters...

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Rewritten: Loki: God of Tricksters

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50ShadesOfAss
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anOrdinary
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Phoenix tried to kill mc Phoenix forced mc to follow her for like 1000 years Mc fall in love with the Phoenix. ‎‎‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

Daoist_Noodles
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Brian_Fisher
Brian_FisherLv3Brian_Fisher

Terrible choice of character self insert. Loki is a great character but not for fan fiction His life span is to long making alot of stuff irrelevant He is to op at start for future development Few can beat him that's why he makes great villain he would be able to escape Also you preventing him from changing stuff ruins the entirety of the story, multiverse is vast there would be a reality where he doesn't want to rule

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

I like it!........an SI loki...with a system...dope.....though just saying the title seems like a title for a story that will be tragic and angsty....pls dont make this like that...keep it happy and fluff [atleast the romance..dont make the romance tragic/sad]..........make MC stupid OP...ie: god of magic?....add some romance and fluff BUT do build it and keep it happy,,,,,,..also if harem keep it small..[maybe pair loki up with his OG wife,,,,,she did love him a lot...] ..eitherway GL................also bash if ya want... **: what does the transformer tag mean?.......if transformers universe...well lets just say,,,I really hope you continue this

816D35
816D35Lv4816D35

The Idea is interesting. Great storytelling overall. I have two remarks: 1. The system you Introduced needs more tuning. 2. Same of the events unfold awkwardly( not smooth)

Godlyghostwatcher
GodlyghostwatcherLv14Godlyghostwatcher

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29kiki
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Trash Trash can see that you are not the intended recipient you are not the intended recipient you are not the best part of helping your browser does not currently recognise any of the north is independant of the realm stop by the teacher in this purpose can't change you ya gwendal the king of the same opinion on the throne our main focus is a diplo

Eldermask
EldermaskLv14Eldermask

The story is haphazardly written, with barely any correlation. Its a fanfic so thats acceptabel but your quality of writing is quite simply bad. I do enjoy how you wrote loki but the thing with the authoritie Destiny made no sense whatsoever it came out of nowhere. Suddenly there is a council and suddenly destiny/fate is pissed at him and then nothing gets done with it.

Lasyandra
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