Xevinaly

Of course! I'll be rooting for you :D

Kingdom Core is, so far, a delightful and engaging read. The author demonstrates a strong command of prose, with an evocative writing style that vividly brings the world to life. Set within the "Lord System" genre the novel offers a refreshing take on familiar tropes. The pacing is deliberate, allowing the story and settlement-building elements to unfold naturally, and the supporting characters are written as real people rather than one-dimensional yes-men to the protagonist. That said, the novel does have some room for improvement in its dialogue and characterization. It introduces a fairly large cast early on, and as a result, many characters struggle to stand out. The dialogue can feel inconsistent, sometimes clipped or awkward, which is particularly noticeable given the high quality of the prose elsewhere. Overall, Kingdom Core is a strong entry in its genre with plenty of promise. I’m excited to see where the author takes the story next. Keep at it!

Did you use AI to help you write this? I noticed some tells in the description (emdash followed by [adjective] incarnate) and wanted to know your experience working with AI if you did.

Yeah but he wasn't also dodging attacks during that.

Freedom is just a meaningless word. Cultivation is strength and wealth.

They always fight over limited output of resources, some given mine or spirit spring ect will only produce a certain amount per year but there's never any discussion of that resource hub drying up and not producing resources AT ALL

I used to live in Dubai, and since speeding tickets are automated rich teens would drag race sports cars down the main highway at night. Sure it cost em like $2000 but that was nothing to them

Even if they can confirm it, he needs to convince them before the game comes out

Too true bestie!!!

I mean, the rooms are like ten meters across at most, usually less. only at idiot couldn't hit a stationary target most of the time.