Seyos

Thanks you for the chapter ! I gladly continue to support you ^^

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I love this story, I'm eager to see what happens next and the beginning of World War II.

take Corsica? That's what I'm wondering, and I can't wait to see the next chapters.

The story is quite interesting, and I really like the duality between Joan of Arc and Napoléon, Joan who is very valiant but lacks of any political sense and wants to fight while preserving the code of chivalry, and Napoleon, who is talented in terms of war strategy and politics but seems very cynical and disrespectful of the chivalric spirit. I find that the two counterbalance each other well and mutually prevent each other from exacerbating their respective flaws, especially when Joan tells Napoleon not to go too fast and to go to Reims before going to Paris. And Napoleon makes Joan understand that war is not just a matter of honor and chivalry and that victory must be achieved even if the methods are orthodox and contrary to some medieval principles. But as for the development of the story... im afraid that the story will remain too close to the historical timeline, knowing that Napoleon returned to Reims at the exact same time. Or that on Patreon it's stated that the real Napoleon (of 1804) wasn't the first to crown himself and that Charles VII had already done so (a rather cool passage that shows Napoleon still has a big ego ^^). This could indicate that the events in this story won't change the future of France at all, which would be very disappointing. Will Napoleon end the war much sooner? Joan d'arc will survive ? Will he succeed in his goal of forming a permanent royal army? Will he go back to war to establish the natural borders and perhaps even take Corsica? We'll see...

And what do they wear on their heads? A helmet or a cap?

Ah okay, I understand, thank you for replying ^^ However, I have one last question. As a writer, when you publish your stories, do you have a general idea of ​​how the story will unfold? Like the beginning, middle, and end of the story, or do you write and create the story as you go?

Hi, I discovered this story recently and I have to say it's cool to have a story about Napoleon II. In fact, I immediately bought the chapters to follow the story. ^^ Even though the technological advancements are cool, I still have some reservations about certain writing choices. For example, I find it a shame that the time skip between his early childhood and adulthood is so abrupt. I understand that the story has to move forward and that all of Napoleon II's ideas/inventions take time to materialize, but it would have been nice to have a few chapters summarizing everything that happened between 1915 and 1929, both about him and his entourage and the events in Europe. For example, did Napoleon (the Emperor) implement new laws? What did he do to assimilate the new non-French-speaking populations (those from the Rhineland and Flanders)? And also, what's strange is that so far, no member of Napoleon's family has appeared, neither his brothers nor his sisters, nor especially Letizia Bonaparte, his mother. Once again, it's cool to implement new technologies and open new opportunities for France by saving the empire, but for now, the story lacks depth and detail, both in terms of the characters and the overall political landscape. However, I'm eager to see what happens next and I will continue to support you.[img=recommend]

Am I the only one who finds all the parts with Lara awkward? Her obsession with the MC who's literally 5 years old. Whether the story takes place in the Paleolithic era or not, he's literally a kid who isn't half her size. And even when her mother tells Lara to wait until he's ready, she doesn't listen and suggests they sleep together! I don't mind romance in this story. But this is just cringeworthy! And despite all the qualities of this story, just this one character made me lose the desire to continue... . Seriously, author, do something! Rewrite Lara, remove her, I don't know, just do something about her, please!

No...just no