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Yeah...I do somewhat agree with you...if I could go back and write again I would definitely quicken pace! But that's what it is...I can't change it! And when I am writing , at that moment...I can't seem to be able to think , this section is too long..I just go with the flow!
Thank you for your feedback buddy! I appreciate it...I also agree that it might be not for everyone! It's just that I really want it to be a trauma, character focused novel...you are right sometimes the trauma may feel to much....but as a writer I hope to go as deep as I can in a trauma focused characters, as I believe everyone in their life have some problems, some traumas...if I show him getting out of it instantly...I feel it will be betrayal to their emotions...The MC's I right are not heroes...they are just deeply troubled humans like any of us, who don;t even know how to deal with it and will learn through life, just like we do...if you ever feel to give this another chance...I will welcome your feedback anytime!
That's his character man! He is paranoid to the core with the past trauma.....it's a psychological effect...our mind always blames someone who is easy to blame...and with his past experiences..
Thank you so much buddy!
Thank you for your review! I know the pacing is slow...but I guess I can't just work around it...the things I plan for 1 chapter ends up covering 2, 3 chapters...so sorry for that!
Thank you buddy! I will keep looking forward to your feedback!
Yeah! It's character introduction for the characters who will play important role in the whole story!
Hey...don't worry I am not gonna drop it anytime soon!! I just hope you will give your love to this one as well!
Ohh...well I haven't really planned it! But I prefer leaving myself a leeway so if needed , I can do it without forcing the plot!
Ahh...hahha you are right but don't worry! It was just an Easter egg, as these are the weapons of the main character of my other novel! 😜