D1AIHATER

Please stop using AI to rewrite some section of your novel. Its blatantly clear to anyone who knows or cares. Just use quilbot if you want some editing done. Or hell yet you can still talk to chagpt about how your story goes. But don't let it rewrite shit. It ends up sounding bland and like a carbon copy style of every other work that uses it

*Author* deleted my review which stated that there work uses a fuck ton of AI to create. So ill state it again, I used checkers and compared to other works on the sight that do use AI, this was by far the one that used it the most. Its blatantly obvious to people who know how to differentiate between AI writing and not. But honestly instead of responding and deleting it just accepted his guilt. It fucking sucks that works like this get prioritised over the ones that are leages better and do not use ai

This story possesses limited to no use of AI, I applause you, keep up the good work! Just little feedback is to always remember that being consise is key, it feels at times that the story gets a bit bloated with overexplaining or deep emotion talks or reflections when it could be cut down to somthing alot smaller that the reader gets the same message from. Either way thats my only real gripe. Great job!

I was unaware that english was your first language. If thats the case I will delete my review. As it makes sense if your using it to translate Sorry about the misshap

lol You had some parts which were good I have to say, but im being a hater for this one. Like a thing which had been bugging me for months. Ai response though is brutal

I dont look through the comments, And if you ever read how chatgpt edits youll understand why I think the author used it. They 100% used it to summerise the novel bits and they used it to edit, you can tell by the spamming of — which has only been spammed in writings recently when evreyone started using AI to edit there novels. And authors who dont use it bascally never use — I wasnt saying the theater is a bad trope, just said its classic

Fair enough broskie. You do you.

Not heavy use of AI but its definitly there, I hope that you work on another book in which you dont entirally, if thats the case ill make sure to support you!

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Could be doing better things with my time honestly but the crash up has been building for like a month. I HATE AI, I HATE AI I HATE AI

>:) Theres a nephis regression which is a incredibly fun read that doesn't use AI, you should search for it