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Hello! I see a few more chapters have been updated. Are any of the further chapters fixed to start reading? Thank you 🙂

It’s a little early in the story (16 chapters), however , I’ve found it very entertaining so far. I actually just realized what time it is and it’s much later than I intended to stay up! The story so far seems to be well written, genders and verbs are all correct. I don’t think I’ve come across any typos or miss spelled words so far either. At this point, the story is very sweet and has had me laughing out loud several times. Any story that makes me laugh on a regular basis is always a winner for me! Great job Author! Keep the chapters coming 😁

Nice story! At this point I’ve read all the available chapters (65) and have enjoyed them. I do hope more chapters will be posted. The story flows nicely, sometimes maybe a little too fast, but not anything that kept me away from the story. There were a. Few errors, typos mostly I think. Ones easy to miss. However, I use the audio function to “read” the majority of the time, so if a typo hits, it’s will get picked up. However, compared to many stories I’ve read here, the number was at a minimum. There was one duplicate (chapter 18 or 19 I think? I left a comment on it), and I think another chapter should be there instead. That was the only place where it didn’t seem to flow properly from one chapter to the next. I feel like this is meant to be a “short” story? Which, personally I really like at times. At the moment all the chapters are free, which makes it even better. Overall I think this was definitely worth the time to read. It progresses steadily, kept me engaged and I’m hoping to see more chapters soon.

Looks like a duplicate chapter. Just FYI, I’m not sure it can be fixed?

Ok, did the last segment have a name typo? I feel like it was Silvano vs Ravian in the last segment…?

Is there a chapter missing? Fun chapter though.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I was thinking the same thing!

Same. It’s the next two chapters? Maybe setting up for another Privlages tier?

Thank you! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️