Jose_Rodriguez_8111

Thanks for the chapter

I feel like the progression of the story is going well

Thanks for the chapter another great GOT HOTD fanfic to read

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapters

Nice would like to see it and there not much to go with. Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter and you get afo quirk so he can give some skills away

Not bad but I feel like you could have handled the situation better. 1 he knows about the attack and still goes to the city 2 when he got his car stolen he should’ve listened to t-dog and got the van instead of wasting time on walking home when he knows an attack is coming. 3 I haven’t seen the show in a while but I kinda remember that she got ambushed so no amount of sneaking techniques would have worked so he should have known that 99% chances that she would have died