Nova255

The first 20 chapters were gold even with the AI. Now it's become so boring. i am really scared the next chapter the author will start to explain how the Avari elf takes a damp

My god, this is bad so bad. If this orc is in the real Warhammer verse

And I agree with you; I don't want to see mindless slaughter. This is why I pointed only to Robert, Tywin, and the Hound. The one who led the rebellion, the one who gave the order to kill all the Targaryens, even babies, and the one who executed the order. I did not mention Eddard Stark or Jon Arryn or any other houses being killed. I only pointed to the irony that the houses that rebel are going to have descendants carrying their names under her husband's rule. the same husband that removed her name from the Iron Throne; if this is not huge blunder, IDK what it is.

And this is why your novel did not enter the Weekly Power Ranking, not even once. You're trying so hard to stick to the original plot. You're trying so hard to limit your MC even though he has the power to do anything, and do you know what the funny thing in this novel is? House Baratheon, House Stark, House Arryn, House Tully, and House Lannister and all their vassals are still alive and kicking and have lots of descendants, but what about Dany? You condemned her house to extinction just so you could please some barking fan that they don't want the MC to have a Targaryen last name. Just imagine the houses that killed her family are alive, but hers are all gone. It's the biggest slap on our MC's wife. You did not give her Robert nor Tywin Lannister nor the Hound. But you left them to die like the original plot, and now you took the Iron Throne in the name of Dracul, not Targaryens, the last thing that reminded her of her house. At the very least author make their children's names. -Dracul Targaryens- or make the second son last name only Targaryen so her house can be resurrected and Dany does not end as a laughing stock in front of the realm. Well, this looks like a rant comment. It is what it is.

Nezu does not exist in this novel at all. It's the biggest weakness in this plot so far. Nezu is a significant figure in the world of My Hero Academia, primarily due to his unrivaled intellect, strategic capabilities, and role as the leader of the most prestigious hero institution. His high-spec quirk makes him one of the most intelligent beings in the world, capable of planning complex operations, and yet he has no role at all in this novel.

Ah yes, we get it. It's not a brainwash. Move on, man. The more you try to justify it, the more it sticks. You could just edit one paragraph in that chapter, and all this will be gone. Instead, you just keep reminding your readers of the topic. all you have to do is not use that skill again.

I really hope this stays 80% modern family and 20% Hollywood, and I have to say, Haley is a way better fit as FML than Dakota Fanning.