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Black Requeza is a lot better by apprentice

Why just call it cipher or anything original everyone uses that name a lot ceil jeez

Yes

Hey I like vegeta and I think you would have been a great vegeta when he was a kid I hope you write a self insert as vegeta that would have been cool

I just want to see them be better like be stronger more smarter and that they can feel like men like Warhammer like if they are battle brothers which they are but like In Warhammer I’m not saying you space marines are bad they just Idk not as good or badass as the space Marines in Warhammer and the ascendance to be honest and very blunt they suck badly and I mean badly sorry but they should have been better like way better and much stronger like in Warhammer the primarches have character and they are super strong honestly I’m fine if you don’t mention them that much but there power it’s just bad I was expecting them to me stronger and I mean very strong and to be feared by there enemies I could say more but this would take long but I really love your story it’s great and try to make the mc more idk like a badass emperor like having the vibes as the emperor of mankind anyways love the sorry still 5 stars

I really hope he makes true space marines and true primarches I feel like these soldiers are weak in my opinion

Bruh tyranids

You know, I hope this story becomes a Multiverse story you know because the invincible story is not that powerful and you’re creating an imperium of these guys so right now at the beginning, it’s pretty awesome but once the store continues, it will kinda get a little boring so like I would love to see Multiverse conquests

For the future imperium

You know, I would love it if you could call the Empire, the imperium of viltrumites