Shadow_XL

So, now that you've read this garbage story, how do you feel now? lol

So, now that you've read this garbage story, how do you feel now? lol

I'm sorry but this is soo boring. Read the entire thing and felt like I read nothing. How do you not introduce any other characters in a story for almost 60 chapters. It's so tiring to read about a dragon fighting monsters over and over again. There are no intelligent characters besides the MC for over 50 chapters, that is insane. Even after the elves are introduced, it's not much better. This doesn't feel like a story, it feels soulless and empty and the MC motivations are bland at best. So yeah I can't give a better rating than 1 star.

Live pls. Idk why people are so obsessed with him dying, let the man live.

I don't understand how you can defend Haley in this situation when she's the one who started the argument.

Rooftop Swordmaster is awful but ok

I just finished reading 200 chapters of this and I’m dropping it. The author isn’t good at writing romance and is even worse with harem. The pacing is also all over the place. Sometimes it feels like I skipped a chapter but no the author just can’t keep up with his own novel apparently.

It’s an enjoyable read but there are a few issues I have with it. First, they introduced Lila as one of the love interest but we barely end up seeing her. Like legit 40+ chapters with absolutely no mention of her and the author even introduces another female character during that time and it seems the author likes her more because she gets way more screen time. I know this is supposed to be a harem but you can’t just forget one of the main female characters for that long, that’s bad writing and pacing. Then there’s the stuff with his family. Bro that was done so terribly, the author made it seem like the family really betrayed him. His own sister made his gf at the time break up with him and called him disgusting. So why when he goes to confront his family, he forgives them and basically acts like nothing happened. All that happened was that the sister cried once and the next day everything was ok. That’s not how real emotions work. It takes time to forgive someone and it’s never that easy. I’m not saying that MC should’ve been immature with his reaction, but he should at least act like what they did hurt him which it did, so why was he acting so unaffected and unbothered when he actually saw them? IMO this was bad writing on the authors part. With all that being said it is interesting and not a complete lost cause. The author just needs to step it up a notch.

This is one of the most well written stories that I've seen on this site. I've only read 8 chapters and I'm already in love. All the characters feel real and are written so well. The best part of this novel is definitely the characters because there's literally not a single bad or even mid character here. Some scenes are so good I almost cried. Author please keep this story going because this is just peak.

Is the MC just a lazy POS or will there be character development?