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You must be lacking any confidence irl if you put value on lvls here lol Get lost you pitiful little clown :)

Oh & I never said I forbid it. Maybe learn to read everything 1st & think about the meaning before going on a power trip based on nothing. I know that’s hard for you as your brain seems to be clouded already.

Oh yea the “ You have to be somebody to say stuff” cliché. How boring. Comparing value of comments by lvls on a damn app. So utterly pathetic. Because this is the equivalent of commenting ”I ate a sandwich while reading the 5 chapters”. It serves absolutely no purpose for sb. trying to guess if he will like the book or not. Or the author because he won’t know what Mr.Literature Critic is referring to. You wasting everyone’s time. So calm down your precious little ego you clown.

Story is great. The investment bad guy seems a bit rushed but ok i guess. MC is borderline unreadable so far. Gets half way through to a heart attack when sth. happens where he doesn't know what to do. Somehow starts behaving like a prebuscent boy who never talked to a woman.. ( cheeks rosy...- like what?). Does he actually grow a spine/ get more mature later? Because now its just bad.

Seriously?? Earth devoured.. oh but my neighbours? WTF. This guy isnt 10 years old. Please act more mature & not like some scared cat.

After he finishes that dungeon run it becomes much better. I’ll keep reading.

Thats not what they care about. My thing is simple. Dont go around saying that this “feels like AI” or “obvious AI”. Says nothing about the story. If you don’t want to pay for chapters that you think are AI then go read the story on other sites. Even if the whole story is Ai written just dont pay for the chapters. Some people seem too dense to understand that ( I don’t mean you know specifically ). The other people would have a point if the whole story was paid for beforehand.

So any critique is automatically valid ?

If your review had actually some merit then i wouldn’t have asked what you were on. A simple mistake? Him being bad will lead to him being mocked. You know teenagers & stuff. Mostly away from their parents. England. How else do you expect the story to start if he isn’t some lowgrade failure? Ai feel? Ah yes. The usual “this sentence isn’t maxed out on emotions etc so it must be Ai”. Common. That’s not even critique at this point.

Has the heat fried your brain? He can leave 100 reviews for all I care. The problem I have is that there are too many wannabe critics who claim sth is AI & then when you ask them for proof the only thing they have is “Trust me/It’s obvious/You are an idiot if you don’t see it”. If you take every review for pure gold then that’s your problem.