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The story has a potential to be great. I still find a lot of things to be confusing here, so I will just wait until more chapters are uploaded. Keep it up, Mr. Author!
Thanks! I appreciate it!
I think I understand what you mean. I should've tried to make it clear that the MC doesn't do everything perfectly in this stage. What I want to highlight in the early part of the story is that the MC is still amateur with his clairvoyance ability as his advantage. His technique is clumsy and he hesitates a lot to use his body, but he knows his only job is to protect the goal, and he will do everything to fulfil that. Anyway, thank you for pointing that out! I appreciate a lot!
Thanks! I really appreciate the support here!
I really love this story, because it is not your normal Naruto story where the MC just cares about getting stronger and gaining immortality, but also showing the ordinary daily life of a normal person. Also, I read the original story (The MTL one), and I have to say that the author's translation here makes the story better and more enjoyable to read. Keep it up, Mr. Author!
Hey, just want to be a shameless author here! Please, help support this story! Give me your power stone, add this story to your library, comment, and share it to your friend! Thank you very much, everyone! Iank_0z
The plan is to make it around 2018, so that the MC could be in the World Cup 2022 as a young player.
There is a plan to go down that route, building a loyal team for him. As for the others... Well, it might involve some spoilers, so just stay patient and please, show your support by adding this story to your library and vote with your stones! Thanks! [img=recommend]
Hey, if this is a legit comment, I am willing to listen any suggestion and feedback from you! Thank you for your comment, nevertheless! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Honestly, I am still working on the mechanism, because some races would be way bigger and some would be way too small.