Facundo_Juarez

In his previous life, was the MC also a child? The way he acts makes it seem like he was a child, or simply an idiot.

It started well with the idea of ​​magic and all. But unfortunately, it's AI-generated, and many chapters are just the MC's thoughts. The MC's personality is pretty bad, in the sense of his supposed "nobility" and "correct morality" and his need to help everyone. And then he met the Martell princesses for two weeks and becomes their feudal lord. Pretty pathetic, considering he's in the world of ASOIAF.

So, he's become one of the Martells' lapdogs already? Just because he's known the two princesses for two weeks? Seriously, I don't understand your MC and his behavior.

I'm really starting to dislike the MC. His "noble" and "morally correct" attitude is annoying. He's stuck in the ASOIF world. And now he wants to teach magic, seriously? You're really messing up the story, man.

ELSA? wtf

Why is everyone so anxious? Is this part of the new generation?

Your story is great; I like that he's not super powerful and still has some development. But I also think you limit him too much at times, like in this instance. He doesn't need to defeat everyone, not at all, but you could have easily had him cut off his hand and then the heroes arrive. It wouldn't have changed much, and it would have felt like he had more involvement. You did something similar by limiting him when he took the entrance exam for UA. Otherwise, keep it up; good work.

how convenient

You made him have an eye only in the last few chapters for no reason. Is that true?

Since when does he only have one eye? I don't think it was ever mentioned, only in the last few chapters.