TheReaderOfReaders

you posted the same chapter twice

Bro, I think that your'e cooking pretty well with this story, keep it up...

I liked this story, it's a shame that it wouldn't be updated as frequently as the kushina story even though I like that story too....

Cool, what did Nous predict about the MC and what was his conclusion?

I didn't really think that the MC and zandar even had a bond to begin with...

no romance, that's blantant fan service that this story doesn't need

You made me laugh in the first chapter, great job.. I hope you make more chapters in the future...

This is a great story, I hope you don't delete it like the heroic spirit template story and update it whenever you can...

Is this the end? if so then it's a good book...

yea, this chapter made me laugh a little, thanks for that...