CARLOS_JAVIER

I can only say one thing: I love it. This is a version of Rhine that is worthy of his position as successor to Gehenna. I am fascinated by Rin's relationship with Shura, in my opinion it's a very well-crafted literary work.

I see, maybe I got confused, my English is not very good, let's say 😅.

Okay... um, how should I put this? I feel like it's moving too... fast? I don’t know how to explain it, but the fact that in less than four chapters he meets a Hashira, defeats him in battle, and then joins the demon hunter corps… I don’t know, bro, it just doesn’t quite convince me… I thought the previous version was a little more believable… but I don’t know, that’s just my humble opinion. Anyway, thanks for the chapter, dear author.

Pues, realmente a mi como fanático de personajes OP me encanta esta historia, sin kmportar si es de autoria propia o una traducción pienso que es un buen trabajo

70 years have passed.... (T△T)

Will this masterpiece ever return? Only time and the author will tell. (;-;)

I didn't understand, that Tory had already entered the dojo since much earlier?

Wonderful story, there are very few Isekai of Yoriichi and this narrative has exceeded my expectations, exemplifies very well the attitude of Yoriichi and follows the continuity of the original work. Very good story.

It has been, 84 years...

Anyway, thank you for the warning. (　＾ω＾)