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new chapter needed

Great novel enjoyed the story release more chapters please. The novel has the Fool's progression system vibes. Overall awesome.

he also guns, grenades and that weird Sword

okay, sometimes I feel key details are missing, The extreme chinese context is not too my liking heavy poor vs young master vibes. But overall still ok. These are all taken from one snow disaster novel a little bit imitation as well.

Why cause he said the truth?

Yes she indeed improves 😅. I wrote it for initial chapters when she was a bit annoying.

I don't like Sif. The novel overall is good, the translation quality is top notch. The MC has too much plot armour and is too passive in terms of personal relationships. Overall not bad.

Ooo

Better than I thought, release more chapters. I generally like the MC and the side characters are well written but how to view the anti piracy chapters?