The_Baby_Girl

My favorite chapter so far

Love where this is going. Thanks for putting out so many chapters!

Great storytelling

Awesome chapter :)

Great chapter 😊

My favorite chapter so far. Kind of an ominous ending to it, can't wait to see how they respond to him being different. Great job :)

Great world building. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story takes Ozul. There are a ton of different directions the story could go, so there's potential for this to have many chapters before it ends. I'm interested in learning about the other creatures Ozul will run into and how he'll deal with the challenges of his new world :)

The skeleton is an awesome addition to the story, good job!

Love the rat fight!

Great first chapter!