Jackleell

What I don’t understand is how the author calls Issei a pervert and treats him like trash for openly talking about wanting a harem, liking boobs, and so on — yet the story is full of characters who are just as perverted, if not worse. The author criticizes Issei for his behavior, but then gives a bunch of other characters harems without any judgment at all. I’m not saying Issei isn’t a pervert; he definitely is. But what about all the other perverts around him? Everyone else gets a harem, and it’s treated as normal or even cool, while Issei gets mocked for wanting the same thing. I don’t love Issei, but I don’t hate him either. I just think the way the story treats him compared to everyone else feels inconsistent. (For clarity: I’m talking about Issei, the MC of High School DxD.)

Love this novel hope u keep updating this my man some of your other warhammer fanfic were a miss but this one is great.. ------------

I’m going to be honest here: I’m at chapter 20, and even though I enjoy Warhammer fanfics, this novel is just boring. The MC is bland, some chapters feel like entire sections were skipped, and the story jumps around with no real flow. The main character likes acting from the shadows, which can be interesting, but here it’s handled in the most lifeless way possible. As someone who reads a lot of Warhammer fanfiction, this one just doesn’t land. I also read the author’s other Warhammer fic, and it suffers from the exact same problems, just with a different MC who seems to be missing a few brain cells. The only thing I can give that story is that it was at least somewhat funny.

Love this fanfic prease more updates <3 -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I’ve read 66 chapters and I kind of like the story, but I really don’t like the MC. He’s annoying, he says random things out of nowhere that don’t make sense, and sometimes he says something us English readers can’t understand at all. He also feels weak. I know he wants to get the Anywhere Door, but that’s going to take a long time.

This is a great fanfic overall. I’ve read about 14 chapters and the story is in Troy, but for some reason it feels like the real main character is Hector, not Night. What’s going on here? We keep getting more POVs from side characters than from the actual MC. Night feels like a background character in his own story.

I stopped reading around chapter 120, I think, not totally sure. I’ve honestly forgotten almost everything about the novel by now. I might give it another try and delete this review if I end up liking it after rereading.

Honestly, this novel should have ended early. It was decent for about the first 20 chapters, but after that it completely goes downhill. The MC gets cucked, the rebellion plot is a mess, his lover gets killed, and the timeline makes no sense. There is even confusion about whether the child is his or not, which only exists because the author already ruined the MC’s relationship. The updates are painfully slow, and the story becomes more frustrating the longer it goes on. I read up to chapter 56, Sacrifice and Wedding, and at that point I genuinely had no idea what was going on anymore. The MC claims he loved his old lover, then after backlash suddenly says he is not in love with her anymore. That is not character development, it is bad writing. He was the one who allowed everything to happen in the first place. After chapter 20, I honestly would not recommend continuing.

Love the novel hope it come back soon -------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I am not asking for anything instant or rushed. I am only asking for more reasonable pacing. For example, when the characters were on the ship, it felt like it took far too long. Fourteen chapters spent almost entirely on the ship made that section feel slow and, honestly, a bit boring to read. I really think that part could have been condensed into around five to seven chapters without losing anything important. I want to be clear that I enjoyed the novel overall. The world, the ideas, and the story are good, which is why the pacing stood out to me. When the story slows down too much, it breaks immersion and makes it harder to stay engaged. I also feel like the main character was nerfed a bit too much during that arc. I understand the need for tension and limitations, but it felt excessive at times and reduced the impact of his established abilities. A better balance between challenge and competence would make the story more satisfying. This is just constructive feedback from a reader who genuinely enjoys the novel and wants to see it improve.