slevink

hahahahah I understand, it will only be a couple of chapters if I remember correctly there are 4 or 5 chapters from hers perspective and we return to Malcom, I needed to show some things about her family. I'm glad you find it annoying, that was the intention. If you continue reading, you may like what follows. Thank you.

Too Bad! But anyway, thank you for giving it a chance, I'm sorry for all the mistakes, English is not my first language and I don't have that much time to work on the story either, I'm glad you made it this far and I will consider your comments. Thank you.

Thank you so much for checking out my story. If you have any constructive feedback, comment or suggestions you may do so. - Author [img=recommend]

hmmmmm well it was an interesting read. there are actions scenes at the beginning of the story already. quite intriguing to. need to figure out more about the main character though. its still early to say anything about him

the synopsis got my attention. I think that's a good start. The story is still at the beginning phase and really need more for me to determine where it will go. But so far, its good. Good luck author

Hey man, thank you for continuous reading. Intensity it's a choice the user needs to apply. It is like muscular tension if he does not apply and effort the intensity will be at the normal rate. In the future more things will be explained about the intensity and the effects that it got in one body.

Dude, thank you so much for the review. I really really appreciate it. It means a lot to me. Er, regarding the cons... For the first con well no much to do. But I do try my best... Can't afford an editor yet hahaha. Will pay attention to it more still. But for the second it will be explained in the story why the treasure are especial and can't be done any more. Hope you continue liking the story!

thank dude. will double check

thanks for the comments dude. I will need to get back on the corrections when I have more free time but I have already taken note of them. Really appreciate it

thank you let me double check