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Is this some kind of MTL or AI writing? Because I don't understand the reason for repeating the same plot from the original like this. The protagonist said he's a reincarnated being who knows the work, but makes the same mistakes as Lin Ming. It just seems like you transcribed the original work and only changed the protagonist's name. There's no difference whatsoever from the original.
These AI snippets are very embarrassing.
If you say so...
Having dialogue in simulations is really strange; I think you should adopt a more impersonal tone, something like an omniscient observer. The simulation only says that he does this and that, but it doesn't give the details. The details are for the common flow of the story; a simulator is better when it's quick and objective.