MrAyer

I mean, does it really matter? It’s not like he’s planning to go back or see any of the other people hasn’t even brought up the first world he went to it all basically has a bunch of people there pining over him. We have no news on it or if he’s going back

bro why weren’t they this smart in th og 😭

this is probably the second worst diary fanfic that ive ever read at theast if you want to give hime a space martial soul give hime the space dragon king that hasn’t really appeared in any fanfic whats this other ultimate space bs martial soul you could have at least picked a real one thats never been seen and then theres this shit diary rewards ok cool he gets the basic starter pack then nothing whats the point for him to just tell everyone the future to save them bs its just a trash author trying to bandwagon this genre of fanfic truly a disappointment

why give us a repeat of the last 5 chapters

a rather refreshing take on the soul land story im looking forward to what changes happen in the future the only major thing i have to say is that the author tends to repeat certain chapters back to back which is annoying but besides that im enjoying it

you just gave three of the same chapters just written differently

please let him leave the og couple alone and just stays as a friend there to many novels that force them apart just cause there are plenty of other women please 🙏🏼

what about the movement technique and hand to hand combat techniques he got in the beginning

not really it’s kind of a dump plot. System basically ruined any chance of familiar bond with him and his family just to make him leave it is pretty dumb

sigh the story seems pretty interesting especially the MC only downside for me is it seems that the story is gonna be heavily influenced by the twins rather then just the dide living his life progressing