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Silver_Valor

Silver_Valor

Lv15
2020-12-20 UnitoGlobal
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839.8h

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  • Silver_Valor
    Silver_Valor10 months ago
    Pubblicato

    Author here with my obligatory 5 star review!! im excited to share the world of Thea with you and I hope you like it and check it out!! There's a lot I want to tell you about Essence, the revival process, Paleontologists, the power ranking and the world were dinosaurs beast and myths come alive!

  • Silver_Valor
    Silver_Valor2 years ago
    Ha risposto a Silver_Valor

    if you want for alternatives Virtus is a good one to use latin for valor and courage

  • Silver_Valor
    Silver_Valor2 years ago
    Ha risposto a Chaos2023

    sure you are welcome too

  • Silver_Valor
    Silver_Valor2 years ago
    Pubblicato

    It is a fantastic story and a breath of fresh air among the more recent novels. Good writing, interesting characters, and a nice steady goal for the mc. I am eagerly looking forward to more of this novel.

  • Silver_Valor
    Silver_Valor2 years ago
    Pubblicato

    A very nice take on kingdom building, interesting characters, and very detailed and well written. The story flows well it is very heavy on the slice of life, which is appreciated. Since it is a kingdom story with knights, i do look forward to seeing some more combat here and there. There does appear to be hints of a bigger plot and some intrigue. I am curious to see how the MC's family is doing or seeing them reunited at some point and more of the world as well. Would recommend this story and am eager to see where it goes!

  • Silver_Valor
    Silver_Valor4 years ago
    Pubblicato

    Enjoyable story with good characters and an interesting setting the Dungeon building aspect is honestly my favorite part my only complaint on that is how short those parts actually are id like to see a better balance between the adventure and dungeon building, other than that my only complaint is the short amount of chapters uploaded id like to see more. Overall I do believe this novel is worth supporting and am eager to see where it goes.

  • Silver_Valor
    Silver_Valor4 years ago
    Ha risposto a XILO

    🤣😂😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣

  • Silver_Valor
    Silver_Valor4 years ago
    Pubblicato

    This is an interesting story so far with a good concept and foundation it's also something I'd enjoy more but can't because of how the novel has been translated it is actually dragging down the overall story and quality due to a lot being lost in translation. The grammar and sentence structure is confusing, disorderly and is just so chaotic to say the least. I'm not sure if this story just isn't edited properly but the english translation has been lack luster and I'd be willing to rate this much higher if I didnt feel the need to have to hire a personal translator just to make heads or tails of some of the dialogue. If the author is willing and able to fix the issues stated above id gladly give this a 4 star minimum.

  • Silver_Valor
    Silver_Valor5 years ago
    Commentato

    See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

  • Silver_Valor
    Silver_Valor5 years ago
    Commentato

    See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire