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rafa1014 years agoPubblicatoIsn't this just Lord Of The People: I Recruited A Mutant Succubus From The Start ? I'm pretty sure this is just a copy of a half translated novel
- rafa1015 years agoCommentato
anyone know if theyre gonna pick it back up or is it dead?
- rafa1015 years agoCommentato
the grammar is good but the speech seems awkward if she's vulgar she should speak informally like "bro" or saying "don't go falling for your sis now, you creep". Could be a minor imprivement imo but the story seems nice. [img=recommend]
- rafa1015 years agoCommentato
No chapter today :(
- rafa1015 years agoCommentato
i did a bit of napkin math and if the experience curve maintains iits exponential increase based on level differential he only need to kill someone about 9 levels higher to get to level 100. With a max skilled ability as long as he doesn't face some lightning resistant it shouldn't be too hard unless the hp growth is also exponential which based on the current scaling shouldnt be too hard.
- rafa1015 years agoHa risposto a DaFukinSage
but wouldnt supremely poeerful individuals offset the avarege? or is it the median of a given species which would not be offset as much by the inflated stats of individuals since there should only be a few.
- rafa1016 years agoCommentato
do you mean physique?
Questo paragrafo è stato eliminato. - rafa1016 years agoCommentato
why does she say "masta" constantly i mean even a little girl can say master i don't know why but it really peeves me. am i the obly one?
Questo capitolo è stato eliminato. - rafa1016 years agoHa risposto a wintermist1994
Hey man i haven't started reading the novel but you should work on your grammar in your own reviews because the first paragraph seems well written (all I've read so far) but your reviews give the impression that you can barely write properly. Hope the comment helps! I'll give a real review after reading a couple of chapters.
