Otacon88

Criiiiinge

Rope into*

The writing is horrific basically incomprehensible and the probing premise completely Don’t even bother

You are correct actually but it’s still incorrectly used here like you said it should at least be the plural

Anymore bigger is bad English ’any bigger’ is better

Hefty is similar and works better but you’d still have to add amount as in ‘a hefty amount of money’

Bulk refers to aesthetic perception of weight or size not amount so it doesn’t work in this context unless you amount. So like “a bulky amount of money”

Stand back up or stand up… stand back means you stand away from something so it doesn’t make sense…

I meant the dragon meter the thingy the story is pretty good otherwise

You’re welcome :)