Kobayachi

This reminds me of a fanfic on this site where the protagonist started with this kind of bloodline, it's a shame it was abandoned. I hope you continue with yours and I'll be following this journey, even better if there's a harem in the storyline!! ^^

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I’ve really enjoyed the romance so far (chapter 93). It has its share of difficulties that must be faced; for instance, the text is very messy and sometimes becomes incoherent. The best scenes are the interactions between Severus and the girls. The fights are the weakest point—the scenes are very hard to digest, like plastic, and everything just ends with a snap of the protagonist's fingers. Aside from that, it's a good read. I’m mostly here for the romance with Bellatrix Black, which is very rare to see in HP fanfics.

More chapters please, author! I really like your story, but I have to say that this Percy Jackson arc was very weak/boring for me, but I'm looking forward to the next arcs ^^

He made the comment, but it's really not there, hahaha, you realize it after chapter 3. I regret my revision, hahaha.

I'm going to drop the story here at chapter 352. I simply can't wrap my head around him trying to disguise or make excuses to hang out with Fleur or any other girl to the other girls, when technically the harem issue has already been resolved for the girls. In previous chapters, the girls accepted the harem, even though they didn't really like it, but what can you do, right? (okay). If he had hidden the relationship from the girls or they didn't want the harem, that would be fine, but he doesn't accept the harem and acts as if nothing that happened before existed is pure trickery for the reader, and the female characters aren't well developed, one or two words and then they're forgotten and then briefly mentioned again, and so it goes, ridiculous. The relationship progresses but you don't see the progress, only the ending. Now, about the uncharismatic protagonist, sometimes funny, but mostly forced, and OP, of course, that's the only positive thing about him. The world had some development with the merging of other schools, but it was all very superficial. The only character who had any development besides Tom, a villain? Seriously? The women in the harem had superficial development, but the villain had more villainous development, hahaha (sarcasm), very funny! I wouldn't recommend it for those who enjoy well-developed harems. However, if you're looking for an overpowered protagonist, you can give it a try, as you might find some pretty cool parts of the story. Thank you, translator-san, for the translations. Thx you.

I need more chapters, author. So far they're going well, I'm hoping for real R18 chapters, not a barrage of double entendres, and a well-developed harem. Two girls were introduced early on, I expect some depth to their relationship, and good luck. It's already in my library.