DarkSouls

I was left in suspense

The atmosphere is well-crafted, the details don't feel forced, and everything that happens has a coherent explanation. There are no negative elements that detract from the reading experience;

Everything will be fine, good writing, good story, but there's a problem, I don't know, I didn't like it, it's that I want to go to Hogwarts, to Hogward, seriously, everything I learned and only to teach there

Thanks for the chapter and I'm going to give you a stone because the corn is gone.

Thanks for the chapter and it made me want to cry

Continue the story, but do not go into too much detail about the sexual assault—just provide a summary of what happened, as not everyone may be able to handle it.

I just started reading the novel but there is something that intrigues me if it is harem or not since she is going to marry them or is it something else because I am confused and I would like that to be clarified for me

Gracias por el capitulo

The plot? Too immediate. The protagonist is an idiot. It dragged on too long. And that happened to him because he was stupid. Good character story. Good drama. Good writing. It's going well. But they're going to keep calling him too much of an idiot. I don’t know. I hope the author improves as they keep writing. Because it doesn’t really deserve the four stars I'm going to give it.

Muy buena contrucción de mundo todo eso pero lo que más me gusta es el crecimiento del personaje porque tiene un buen crecimiento y lo que me falta es el romance o una señal de eso romance