Alanray64
Avid reader, particular interests in Urban, rebirth/cultivation, critical returns and such novels along the theme of “am I a cultivation big shot”
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Alanray643h agoCommentatoDoesn’t drop a name? So asking for some random lady using a sword really narrows down the people there.
- Alanray644d agoCommentato
So just leave? No message after what he said and done. Any wonder why he wasn’t liked in his past life with such a low EQ.
- Alanray644d agoCommentato
The loser asks to many questions 🤦🏻♂️
- Alanray644d agoCommentato
Isn’t it Ophelia losing her composure?
- Alanray644d agoCommentato
..talk to Phield? That’s kinda not right…
- Alanray645d agoCommentato
Annie is a guys name? Don’t think so.
- Alanray645d agoCommentato
…her… Pretty sure that is the right gender.
- Alanray645d agoCommentato
How is she seeing his face if it’s covered?
- Alanray645d agoCommentato
Isn’t it breakfast for seven before, the 4 girls, the 2 woman and the MC?
- Alanray647d agoCommentato
All these words add to the word count of the novel in determining cost. They really are not needed. Keep it to a simple sentence if you must continue. Or use the chapter notes/comments area.
