Kulark

Thank you!

Just the lifespan

Well, yeah. I tried to make it so where there’s an actual character development. I was still new when I released the early chapters, and I’m still new to writing even now. Anyways, thank you for your review. I don’t actually try to delete comments as long as they’re not filled with insults as I’m aware that I too should grow, and feedback helps me with that.

Ah shit

OF COURSE!

Is it really? I never kept count on the words per chapter.

Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts. I understand the early parts of the story and the MC’s behavior won’t work for everyone, especially with how exaggerated and flawed he can come across at that age. Some of your points about emotional consistency, family treatment, and pacing are things I can take into consideration if I ever revise the earlier chapters. That said, I would appreciate criticism being kept about the story itself rather than personal insults. I don’t mind negative reviews, but I do prefer they stay respectful. Thanks again for reading as far as you did.

Thank you very much! I am actually intending to finish this story until it ends, so don't worry about me getting tired of it. Still, I highly value your review, it really made my day 😊

Inflation

Thank you very much! 🙏