MartinalME

I started to read now, I'm about 30 chapters in. The author is creative to this be an alternative reality, so the Chinese team and the Chinese players can be more competitive.

Great story! It's fun to read, the mc is very likable and the plot moves at a speed that's comfortable. The relationships between the characters are enjoyable to read, especially the relationship between the mc and Mito

It's incredible! Your approach to Sheldon is perfect, he continues to be a odd person but this time you made him lovable, caring and over all a great human being

I love this type of book, so for me is easy a 5 star. Continue with the good work, I expect you don't drop that.........................................

Great work! The beginning was a bit off, but as the author became more comfortable the story flew nicely.:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::''''::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

Personally I wait until a storie have 30 chaps upfront, so I can read in one sit.

It's a great fic!!! The Mc feels like a human being, he has emotional struggles, he doubt him self and make mistakes like all of us. All his relationships are layered, which makes room to the development of the mc, and the power system is balanced.

The game with Newcastle was great! It shows that Tristan is growing in his football, and having all the greats as example, his performances are bordering other clubs so is pretty normal the abuse he is suffering.

Ono of the best history in this site!!! After the start to creat his own chapters, the history just keep getting better and better. The romance is top notch, on of the few that really put some effort in development of the romance and the female lead. Keep the good work, you're doing great

Continue man!!!!!