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Automotive companies don't really create new battery technologies. Battery manufacturers are their own corporate field which fund outsourced research to laboratories/universities to fuel battery advancements. It would make the most sense to create a patent company to license his technologies and use a research lab to obfuscate where his advancements are coming from. He is effectively trying to create a monopoly in both the battery and automotive industry which will only paint a target on himself.

Yeah okay, a random 3rd world college undergrad student randomly comes out with a fully functional ultra advanced technology component. This is hyper unrealistic considering just the advanced fabrication needed to even begin such a process and interdisciplinary specializations needed for each area of improvement. I could understand using his cheat to create this for self use or even to sell as a cloud service (which anyone could technically do) while keeping the hardware hidden and proprietary. He could even come out with hyper specific single leap technology improvements he first patents before trying to sell rather then a comprehensive improvement in all areas. The best method of introducing advanced technology is to create an actual research oriented company, hire employees, and slowly guide their efforts on a roadmap using known feasible technological routes of improvement.

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Not that great. He has a system that can grant him anything without effort. Instead of incremental progress or struggling to make money with various schemes he wins an absurd bet, writes 1 book, and robs root once. He doesn't even take time to plan out a comprehensive set of powers or assign different powers to cover his identity. The story is basically over at that point, just a typical gary stu with overwhelming power and foreknowledge. Personally I would have invested in fuinjutsu + shadow clone which could basically print money and plan out a comprehensive set of powers to work towards prioritizing speed > attack > defense to work towards. An alternative approach would have been to specialize in stealth and steeling to collect wealth overtime with an alternative identity.

Pure VRMMORPGs have very low stakes, making most actions meaningless in terms of actual power progression. At best they can make some real money by selling items and find a few friends.

Ino says she is earth and that she counters Hinata's lightning. This is backwards, in Naruto at least.

The system is too OP. Would have been better if he gets a single random jutsu, stat, or % towards each release type for a small boost from each corpse. Why does it arbitrarily allow him to skip hand-signs without having to do any training to master/perfect each jutsu. The jutsu creation system is ridiculous, seemingly able to do anything without clearly defined limits or caveats. For example if it was limited to combining jutsu components for jutsu he already knows it would be less OP. MC is very arrogant and goes about things in a super obvious manner. He simultaneously doesn't care about the village allowing normal cannon plots while willing to desert yet expose himself to arbitrarily help the village without any reason/goal in mind. Why did he break out of prison instead of simply leaving a clone behind and using earth escape? The MC should have simply learned/created jutsu to help him in his primary means of gaining power, staying in contact with corpses while undetected. He could have infiltrated the various hidden villages and farmed skills without causing any stir or worked as an undertaker.

As someone who enjoyed the original novel the cheat came from I think this fanfic is great. So far it doesn't seem like a necessity to have read the original to enjoy this one either but decently worth checking out if you haven't already read it.

Series was renamed to "King Eye" but was originally called "King of Gods".

Seems like a bust to me. You created an isekai summoning story but almost immediately do a time-skip instead of any world building or power exploration and go on and on with meaningless conversations. The most interesting part of these kind of stories is the progression through learning about the system/skills/magic and world building and it is seemly absent all together from the start of the story.