LordSatan666

adressed not dressed

so far pacing is good chapters feel a little short but im used to reading longer novels character development makes sense mc is not instantly op which is nice Steven is getting dressed without forcing him out of the story so overall id rate this a 9.5 out of 10

it's a mix of jutsu to shape and the float fruit to direct it

definitely worth the read mc is emotionally stunted but not a dense moron story flows pretty well and has a good feel

here's the thing on level up mc needs luck developmental ability for increased drops and also magic recovery or like a all recovery ability something that will help with his main issue resource management

progression wise the mc has a system that promotes stable growth not explosive levels for no reasons mc trains for his gains hopefully the quality stays the same but definitely a recommended read for danmachi fans

this was the slime floor

overall a decent story minor issues that when doing a rewrite/edited version will fix easy chapters need to be longer cause right now they are to small I'd that means less updates that's fine as long as the pacing of the story isn't messed up which it's starting to feel like with the short chaps

changes some details but overall a good reading experience

is it a person not the mc or is it a transformation because I'd it's a person then ratatoskyr or eitri would be good guesses due to the world tree