Readtilltheybleed

🍒🥢❓ Please change cherry chopstick to the original cherry chapstick… thanks. 🙏🏻

This really needs visual aid… It’s like, I’m invincible because I’m invincible. 12 machine guns and he drives by them unscathed while causing a seven car pileup of his enemies. Tell me you are awesome without TELLING ME that you are awesome.

A little too euphemistic for me…

Some typos are fine~ but you called an underwater base an underwear base… and as funny as that sounds it’s a bit much.

That was good until the last two paragraphs… after such a wonderful roadtrip they apparently didn’t even say goodbye. That’s kinda cold.

Author kinda back tracked… He gave her the look.

I was reading this late at night and my laughter nearly woke someone…

Two? ⛽️ 🔥

Besides, Peter could save more people with his intelligence focusing on healthcare and humanitarian issues than he ever could with his alter ego.

This looks like it’s gonna be dumb…